Recent Comments

11/3/21, 8:49 AM
I'm loving the building tension (headaches)! It's hot and full of plot! Everything about this story is just great, the pacing, the characters, the drama. Another few chapter and I'll just be typing incoherently.
11/2/21, 3:33 PM
This is super sexy. Super hot and sexy. Love this series. Also the idea that things are causing the minions of the master (hehe) to also lead to the submission of others is quite hot. Also I am a sucker for happiness so I like the idea that the captain still has room in his heart for his girlfriend. Maybe a line can be had that showcases that she sorts of gets effected in that she realizes its totally normal for her boyfriend to submit to the master and play with the other good boys. Like its not cheating, its just natural. hehe

11/3/21, 8:21 AM
Thanks @Heru Kane . Been very happy to read your feedback. And spoiler alert, I do like happy endings as well XP
11/3/21, 8:19 AM
*Holy* fuck. Wow. Just. * Chef's Kiss*
11/3/21, 8:19 AM
Lmao, just realized I accidentally disabled comments. Was eagerly waiting for them
11/3/21, 4:25 AM
Fuck yeah, hottest part about mind control is seeing the hero slowly break and you made it so fucking hot, watching a true hero like Batman being broken from the inside.

11/3/21, 6:50 AM
@Jockass Thanka man!
11/3/21, 6:41 AM
Absolut geil . Ich will auch solche Punks kennenlernen und von Kopf bis Fuß tätowiert und gepierct werden 😁😉
Evan
11/3/21, 4:45 AM
Very excited to see more. Great first part. Excellent writing, as Hypnothrill says. Hot elements, a mystery, and eager for more.
11/3/21, 4:40 AM
Wow that was awesome! Great work!
11/3/21, 3:16 AM
I love this series so much!
Kyle343
11/3/21, 1:42 AM
Lol, fellow author, The Slaver, plagiarized this story: https://mcstories.com/WidburnsTurnabout/WidburnsTurnabout.html