Recent Comments

Cracker
11/2/21, 12:13 PM
Wow, another great chapter. I like how you're taking your time with it. Their slowly yielding seduction is even hotter than the actual action. :-)

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Cracker Thanks man
Anonymous
11/2/21, 12:44 PM
wow such a hot story !! will you do a Part 2? definitely need more of this!

Oddballs
11/2/21, 6:15 PM
@ Yep! But sadly there's only a second part and nothing else as of yet. Unless my friend comes up with more and sends them to me for revision and tweaking.
11/2/21, 2:25 PM
since there's basically no sex (yet) in this chapter, gotta say my favorite line is definitely: "it kind of looks like you’re about to faint.” “No, I’m…” said Ben as he fainted. lmaoo I love lines like that.
11/2/21, 1:53 PM
A proper crotch-head-TF story within a bigger, more expansive modular lore too. It really lets the imagination 'go play' once you've finish reading. I liked the weirdness, (of course I would) but I loved the sharp, fast reading as well (of course I would). There was immersion and detail where needed, but it never got bogged down in technical faff. Bam!
11/2/21, 11:46 AM
So hot! Super sensual and loving the scent focus
Anonymous
11/2/21, 10:10 AM
Loving this series, seeing how the signal is spreading and its effects. Coach and Bobby is one hot scene, as is the resistance of Alec.
11/2/21, 6:38 AM
Really good story! Hope to see more!
10/6/21, 7:44 PM
This was awesome. Please give us a sequel

10/9/21, 9:11 PM
Hey @jaxon, I doubt I'll do a sequel on this one, it feels complete to me. I've got a bunch of other stories on the site if you want to check 'em out, and I'm always working on something new.

11/2/21, 6:32 AM
I understand. I just really like this one and keep coming back to it. If you ever wanted to revisit the universe, though . . . @Derek Williams
11/2/21, 6:14 AM
This is a work of art. Hot, compelling, wonderfully written.
Oct 30, 2021
11/1/21, 5:44 PM
jeez i cant even remember where or when i read this for the first time but its definitely worth reading again. It's sweet romantic and loving. its almost a shame when it comes to a head, I love where it ends. it would have been so rewarding to build Rich's character and relationship into the other two men more.

11/2/21, 6:03 AM
@Xmokey now see I've had a sequel in mind for some years...