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11/3/21, 12:15 AM
Hoooooot loved the fingering.
11/2/21, 5:38 AM
so hot! can't wait for more! maybe some witches cursing rude jocks or some fun costume transformations

11/2/21, 10:35 PM
@Horn - thanks. I've run out of time for writing at the mo but have so many ideas, I'll get to part to ASAP. Your comments spurring me on.
Ricky Redman
11/2/21, 10:23 PM
I wanna be a loyal employee of NO Security Services.
11/2/21, 9:07 PM
Dang, man, this is a super hot chapter. I both look forward to the next one and don't, because it sounds like it's going to be the last.

11/2/21, 10:02 PM
@Proteus it is the last part for this commission
11/2/21, 9:19 PM
awesome story! looking forward to future installments
11/2/21, 4:12 PM
Oh this was a fun read. There seems to be an opening for a prequel with Theodore, any chance of it being followed upon?

11/2/21, 8:24 PM
@MysteriesOfMe Very likely
Ome
11/2/21, 3:17 PM
these are so well integrated into Canon its actually a little embarrassing for me like I feel real geeky lmfao tx for story you huge nerd 👌👌💀☠

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Ome No you're a nerd! lol
Cracker
11/2/21, 12:13 PM
Wow, another great chapter. I like how you're taking your time with it. Their slowly yielding seduction is even hotter than the actual action. :-)

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Cracker Thanks man
Anonymous
11/2/21, 12:44 PM
wow such a hot story !! will you do a Part 2? definitely need more of this!

Oddballs
11/2/21, 6:15 PM
@ Yep! But sadly there's only a second part and nothing else as of yet. Unless my friend comes up with more and sends them to me for revision and tweaking.
11/2/21, 2:25 PM
since there's basically no sex (yet) in this chapter, gotta say my favorite line is definitely: "it kind of looks like you’re about to faint.” “No, I’m…” said Ben as he fainted. lmaoo I love lines like that.