Recent Comments

11/2/21, 9:07 PM
Dang, man, this is a super hot chapter. I both look forward to the next one and don't, because it sounds like it's going to be the last.

11/2/21, 10:02 PM
@Proteus it is the last part for this commission
11/2/21, 9:19 PM
awesome story! looking forward to future installments
11/2/21, 4:12 PM
Oh this was a fun read. There seems to be an opening for a prequel with Theodore, any chance of it being followed upon?

11/2/21, 8:24 PM
@MysteriesOfMe Very likely
Ome
11/2/21, 3:17 PM
these are so well integrated into Canon its actually a little embarrassing for me like I feel real geeky lmfao tx for story you huge nerd πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ’€β˜ 

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Ome No you're a nerd! lol
Cracker
11/2/21, 12:13 PM
Wow, another great chapter. I like how you're taking your time with it. Their slowly yielding seduction is even hotter than the actual action. :-)

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Cracker Thanks man
Anonymous
11/2/21, 12:44 PM
wow such a hot story !! will you do a Part 2? definitely need more of this!

Oddballs
11/2/21, 6:15 PM
@ Yep! But sadly there's only a second part and nothing else as of yet. Unless my friend comes up with more and sends them to me for revision and tweaking.
11/2/21, 2:25 PM
since there's basically no sex (yet) in this chapter, gotta say my favorite line is definitely: "it kind of looks like you’re about to faint.” β€œNo, I’m…” said Ben as he fainted. lmaoo I love lines like that.
11/2/21, 1:53 PM
A proper crotch-head-TF story within a bigger, more expansive modular lore too. It really lets the imagination 'go play' once you've finish reading. I liked the weirdness, (of course I would) but I loved the sharp, fast reading as well (of course I would). There was immersion and detail where needed, but it never got bogged down in technical faff. Bam!
11/2/21, 11:46 AM
So hot! Super sensual and loving the scent focus
Anonymous
11/2/21, 10:10 AM
Loving this series, seeing how the signal is spreading and its effects. Coach and Bobby is one hot scene, as is the resistance of Alec.