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11/2/21, 1:58 AM
Great chapter! Nightwing is my absolute favorite hero so this was a real treat. Loved the twist.

11/2/21, 5:03 AM
@Jesse K Me too, Dick is such a hot guy to see get plowed lol
11/1/21, 1:46 AM
Hmmmm. I want to preface this comment by saying that the story is super-well written! I love the expansion from the original version (I knew I'd seen it before--the Haus of Hypno!), and the scenes are incredibly erotic. I also want to add that these are purely my thoughts, and no one should cater to them. All that being said, there is something about the story--a theme that has occurred in several tales--that is giving me pause, and I want to see if anyone else has a similar problem: namely, the inclusion of women. Whenever female characters are brought into a story on this site (unless they are in purely ancillary roles) and brought under whatever mind control is happening, I immediately lose my arousal. This isn't the first time this has happened: dear Swizzington included several teen girls in "Slave Academy'; the "And Then There Were None" Halloween story last year included two FTM transformations, as did Norismo's recent "Jock-o-Lantern;" and even you, @Hypnothrill, have included mentions of women (Claire, the main character's former girlfriend, in "New Realities", and the family's mother in "Aftermath"). Now, a big part of that is obviously because I'm gay, and so reading about women being affected isn't a turn-on for me. But on a deeper level, I've realized that the addition of female characters adds *realism* to the story--and I've learned that realism is the antithesis of the fantasy porn of these tales. All of the sudden I go from thinking "God, this is hot" to "Oh, women are being affected, that will cause changes..." So when my brain turns on, my downstairs turns off. :p Does anyone else (who isn't bi/pan/attracted to multiple genders) have a similar experience? Thanks for reading! :D

11/1/21, 3:38 AM
@Feed Your Head I really should have heeded some advice that Hypnothrill once gave out. Namely, that sometimes it is best not to explain things. In the original work, it always bothered me that I never explained what exactly was happening to half of the people on the planet. I thought the device of having the signal literally erase the opposite sex from your vision was an interesting way of plugging this plot hole. I purposely limited how much ff sex I wrote, but I can concede that the inclusion of women in any form might be a turn off to some. The good news is: I have no other plans to discuss any females or female-identifying characters beyond this chapter. I think in subsequent chapters there is one mention of a mom leaving town because her son and second husband (the step dad) are fighting and I'll probably let that stand. Beyond that one line, we are MM from here on out.

11/1/21, 5:12 AM
@chiboxerboi Well, I actually am glad you explained what was happening to the women, because unlike the men's dorm where the previous chapter was set, a classroom is a coed space, and to me, the absence of women would have been too conspicuous and would have bugged me!

11/2/21, 4:25 AM
@Feed Your Head The issue is not that of realism but of affirming the truth and validity of the story. If the story is set on a university and you don't say it's an all male school, it would be strange to not see a female character. I like Hypnothrill didn't see anything wrong with the scene, it made the story more valid to show the signal affecting both genders. There's more than enough guys bringing other guys into submission that it shouldn't be disturbing. You focused too much on the girls, when they're introduced, fall under the signal, and bring others under.
11/2/21, 1:57 AM
Gentle please!!
11/2/21, 12:59 AM
This is, no joke, SOOO good; love checking up now and then to see if it continues. GREAT work.
Nov 1, 2021
11/2/21, 12:22 AM
I love stories like this 10/10 I hope there is more
Anonymous
11/1/21, 11:47 PM
this story is so good! please keep it going.
11/1/21, 10:44 PM
Holy, shit! I'm enjoying a lot with the 'Kinky Note' series, but you going back to the crossdressing humiliation is so damn hot!! Man, I LOVE it!

Oddballs
11/1/21, 11:05 PM
@Plymouth58 well credit goes to my friend. This was mainly all him, he just asked me to work my magic and revised it, and I tossed in a few ideas of my own here and there.

11/1/21, 11:45 PM
Ohh, I see! @Oddballs But it remind me some hot scenes in your Ghost Possession series! Anyway, thanks to both of you!
Nov 1, 2021
11/1/21, 11:15 PM
Wow. This has to continue.
Nov 1, 2021
11/1/21, 10:59 PM
Short, sweet, and sexy!
11/1/21, 10:48 PM
Loving it. can't wait to see where it goes