Recent Comments

11/2/21, 11:25 PM
As ever, you write brilliant stories. I loved the moment he found he was shorter. That's a kink I think I got from reading your stories in my teens. Absolutely loved the back and forth, the moment he realised his premis was wrong. You're a master of the smart to dumb story man and I love the raygun! Thanks for another great story. It's your stories which got me writing.

11/3/21, 12:49 AM
Thanks so much @Lusty Stallion! I've got a major kink for shorter guys. I'm six foot, and if a genie showed up and told me I could be 5'4", I'd jump at it. I'm sure it's just a 'grass is greener' thing, but that doesn't stop me from lusting after it. As for the premise, I'm with Monroe on this one. Being smart *is* dumb. I'm trying to make my thirties about just letting myself be hotter and dumber, and so far I'm happy with the result. You'd be surprised how much lower stress life gets when you don't over-analyze everything. My new mantra is 'don't try to be a himbo. be a himbo.'
11/3/21, 12:15 AM
Hoooooot loved the fingering.
11/2/21, 5:38 AM
so hot! can't wait for more! maybe some witches cursing rude jocks or some fun costume transformations

11/2/21, 10:35 PM
@Horn - thanks. I've run out of time for writing at the mo but have so many ideas, I'll get to part to ASAP. Your comments spurring me on.
Ricky Redman
11/2/21, 10:23 PM
I wanna be a loyal employee of NO Security Services.
11/2/21, 9:07 PM
Dang, man, this is a super hot chapter. I both look forward to the next one and don't, because it sounds like it's going to be the last.

11/2/21, 10:02 PM
@Proteus it is the last part for this commission
11/2/21, 9:19 PM
awesome story! looking forward to future installments
11/2/21, 4:12 PM
Oh this was a fun read. There seems to be an opening for a prequel with Theodore, any chance of it being followed upon?

11/2/21, 8:24 PM
@MysteriesOfMe Very likely
Ome
11/2/21, 3:17 PM
these are so well integrated into Canon its actually a little embarrassing for me like I feel real geeky lmfao tx for story you huge nerd ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ’€โ˜ 

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Ome No you're a nerd! lol
Cracker
11/2/21, 12:13 PM
Wow, another great chapter. I like how you're taking your time with it. Their slowly yielding seduction is even hotter than the actual action. :-)

11/2/21, 7:59 PM
@Cracker Thanks man
Anonymous
11/2/21, 12:44 PM
wow such a hot story !! will you do a Part 2? definitely need more of this!

Oddballs
11/2/21, 6:15 PM
@ Yep! But sadly there's only a second part and nothing else as of yet. Unless my friend comes up with more and sends them to me for revision and tweaking.