Recent Comments

Nov 1, 2021
Evan
11/1/21, 10:26 PM
Love this premise.
11/1/21, 10:03 PM
good story so far cant wait for the next update
TheGreatStoryTeller
11/1/21, 9:43 PM
I remember seeing a comment on your deviantart awhile back saying you'd thought a Halloween version of the story would be fun. I'm so glad you did this! I'm really eager to see how Randall likes his changes!
11/1/21, 9:40 PM
love this story!!!! was a pleasure to read it!
Nov 1, 2021
11/1/21, 8:41 PM
I want more!!!!
Nov 1, 2021
11/1/21, 8:29 PM
Left me wanting more!
11/1/21, 7:57 PM
Super hot!
Cracker
11/1/21, 4:36 PM
Really hot. Love the entire series but this one is the best

11/1/21, 7:53 PM
@Cracker Thanks man!
Conversion Enthusiast
10/31/21, 4:37 PM
love the progression of this all. its so finely detailed its enjoyable but i guess i would have preferred some of the pacing to be a bit longer on the struggle but thats just me being picky i think and liking to see the hero break. the pace you have is great i might just be sadistic hahaha. regardless i love the superheroes used and superhero is my favorite topic! looking forward to more! already read chapter 2 as well

11/1/21, 7:52 PM
@Conversion Enthusiast Thanks man, I tend to write on the shorter side because I am always thinking of jerking off and I know I hate it when a writer drags a scene out instead of just letting me shoot...so that's on me :)
11/1/21, 7:19 PM
I did not expect that ending. That was quite the twist. Was it Parasite the whole time with Blockbuster? In any case, this was a great continuation. The only thing I would have wanted to see was more with Parasite becoming Dick. I did enjoy the bits of him transforming between Tim and Conner at the beginning, though. Looking forward to more chapters of this.

11/1/21, 7:50 PM
@Proteus Yes after he blacked out it was Parasite making himself believe he was Dick so it could fool Bruce.