Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/31/21, 1:08 PM
is there a point to the word(s) Irish and Irish-American being repeated over and over and over and over ... ?
10/31/21, 1:04 PM
would like to read more on what happens next......
10/31/21, 8:52 AM
Every chapter adds a new element that makes the story even better! I'll still be reading this at Chapter 50.

10/31/21, 11:50 AM
@Norismo agreed!
Oct 30, 2021
10/31/21, 9:13 AM
There were a lot of elements here I really loved, including the "Jock O'Clock" refrain and the way the men in the town were being slowly altered even before the mass brainwashing event took place. But man, this story is trying to pack in a LOT of disparate elements into its 5000 words, and I couldn't always keep up with the twists and genre switches.

10/31/21, 9:16 AM
@Hypnothrill 100% Agree, but that's how Season of the Witch (of which this is a light parody) is, it's just a bombardment of information and then it ends.

10/31/21, 9:28 AM
@Norismo Ohhh! I saw the "Parody" tag, but having not seen Halloween III, I didn't know what this story might be parodying.

10/31/21, 9:35 AM
Halloween 3 is one of my favourite films @Hypnothrill, I forgot that people might not have seen it 😂
Oct 30, 2021
10/31/21, 8:20 AM
hmmmm. suitably scary for holloween.
10/31/21, 8:16 AM
drinking. ugh. its not bad on itself just too much of it is bad. i hope tanner fails this once. sofar he been on a streek.
Anonymous
10/31/21, 7:44 AM
Hot. Always love a story of ONE slut for MANY ALPHAS. Cass canshare that ass out, and a little rough dominant sex is my personal slutty fantasies,
10/31/21, 7:41 AM
just my type of story. fucking great. I'd love to collaborate on a story with you. we have the same devious minds
10/31/21, 5:01 AM
Holy fuck that as hot!
10/31/21, 4:51 AM
amazing concept love it