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10/30/21, 10:14 PM
I wonder how will terrance and kenny will look like when it as over
10/30/21, 9:29 PM
Devon should start to understand his father more & start to enjoy drinking with him. After all didn't Jesus turn the water into wine,..so what could be so bad about a little [or more than a little] drink now & than. I'm sure Devon's father would be more than happy to encourage him with Tanners blessing, [perhaps he's more 'like father/like son' than they had previously realized], & we can think of all kind of fun two drinking buddies can get into !!!
EJG
10/30/21, 8:22 PM
So sad that this,one of the hottest stories here,did not get another chapter..
Anonymous
10/30/21, 8:21 PM
Please continue this
10/30/21, 8:19 PM
Excited to see what Tanner does to Devon and his dad! I really love Tanner's specific brand of casual, dickish mind control, just fucking around with people seemingly for the fun of it
10/30/21, 7:58 PM
Didn't enjoy this one quite as much as the first one. The first half of the story being in Andy's thoughts, he actually is kind of a dick. The story picked up when it switched to a more fully third person sex scene and we were no longer listening to Andy's negative presumptions and insecurities.
10/30/21, 12:36 PM
yessssss💖 i love this tbh, Spencer & Andy are so fun together, and watching Spencer slowly realize the effect he has on other people is A+++

10/30/21, 7:32 PM
@Cumguts Thank you!! Spencer is *so* fun to write.
10/30/21, 7:26 PM
The second half did not disappoint. Wonderful story.

10/30/21, 7:30 PM
@amul That's fantastic to hear, glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/30/21, 7:07 PM
I'm hard!! This is so hot!!!
10/30/21, 4:42 PM
What is “The Tusk Wars show”? What if an orc wizard was banished to the modern world of America? Those who had banished the orc wizard thought he had no magic left to return back to the world which he came from. What if that orc discovered that he could create more magic by transforming humans into horny musclebound orcs and what if he liked transforming the people into orcs? Once those who banished the orc realize what they have done the offer the inhabitants tools in which they can fight back against the orc wizard and his army of horny Orcs.

10/30/21, 5:18 PM
@Big-Zargo 12 This is a really interesting, detailed mythology that doesn't quite come across in the 1200 word story you have presented above. But I think that balancing exposition with sex scenes is one of the toughest parts of writing erotic fantasy. Too little exposition and the reader is confused like I was, but too much exposition can stop the sexiness of a story dead in its tracks.

10/30/21, 6:36 PM
@Hypnothrill Yeah, finding the right balance of story and sexiness is quite a little bit of a challenge. I mainly made the story because I want to do something for Orctober before it's ended. I was planning on much longer story in fact a miniseries for Orctober. I guess I'll save that miniseries for next year. Well as Orctober ends gnome-vember begins.