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10/30/21, 8:19 PM
Excited to see what Tanner does to Devon and his dad! I really love Tanner's specific brand of casual, dickish mind control, just fucking around with people seemingly for the fun of it
10/30/21, 7:58 PM
Didn't enjoy this one quite as much as the first one. The first half of the story being in Andy's thoughts, he actually is kind of a dick. The story picked up when it switched to a more fully third person sex scene and we were no longer listening to Andy's negative presumptions and insecurities.
10/30/21, 12:36 PM
yessssss💖 i love this tbh, Spencer & Andy are so fun together, and watching Spencer slowly realize the effect he has on other people is A+++

10/30/21, 7:32 PM
@Cumguts Thank you!! Spencer is *so* fun to write.
10/30/21, 7:26 PM
The second half did not disappoint. Wonderful story.

10/30/21, 7:30 PM
@amul That's fantastic to hear, glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/30/21, 7:07 PM
I'm hard!! This is so hot!!!
10/30/21, 4:42 PM
What is “The Tusk Wars show”? What if an orc wizard was banished to the modern world of America? Those who had banished the orc wizard thought he had no magic left to return back to the world which he came from. What if that orc discovered that he could create more magic by transforming humans into horny musclebound orcs and what if he liked transforming the people into orcs? Once those who banished the orc realize what they have done the offer the inhabitants tools in which they can fight back against the orc wizard and his army of horny Orcs.

10/30/21, 5:18 PM
@Big-Zargo 12 This is a really interesting, detailed mythology that doesn't quite come across in the 1200 word story you have presented above. But I think that balancing exposition with sex scenes is one of the toughest parts of writing erotic fantasy. Too little exposition and the reader is confused like I was, but too much exposition can stop the sexiness of a story dead in its tracks.

10/30/21, 6:36 PM
@Hypnothrill Yeah, finding the right balance of story and sexiness is quite a little bit of a challenge. I mainly made the story because I want to do something for Orctober before it's ended. I was planning on much longer story in fact a miniseries for Orctober. I guess I'll save that miniseries for next year. Well as Orctober ends gnome-vember begins.
10/30/21, 4:57 PM
I love it darkblade. Thanks as ever for your ideas to spur my writing and fantasising.

10/30/21, 5:47 PM
@Lusty Stallion glad I helped
10/30/21, 5:32 PM
really good!! cant wait for part 2!!!
10/30/21, 6:48 AM
Great concept for a story, and the orc transformation was well-described. The rest of the story left me with lots of questions, like: Why does it take until Episode 5 for the orc to come out of the screen and transform them? Why do they go back into the TV program rather than out into the real world to transform others into orcs? Why does the orc have an ordinary human name (Tom), while the ordinary humans have fantasy character names (Dash and Lucius)?

10/30/21, 4:27 PM
@Hypnothrill It's great to hear that you like my story. To answer your question, it does not take five episodes for a person to transform into an orc. It's at random, but the more episodes you watch the more influence it has over you and higher the chances of you transforming into an orc. It at least takes one watched episode for humans to start transform into an orc, after that it can take up to 30 days or less for a person to change. if The person is lucky/Unlucky enough not to transform within 30 days then to have a strange compulsion to watch another episode or go and find a nearby orc. Why did they go back to the TV program when they transform into orcs, is because the Orc wizard wanted them there for the scene, it is also depended on the episode, over if it would be good idea to leave them in the "real world". Orcs will only start staying when a sufficient size of the population are converted. Otherwise people forget those have been transformed into orcs/ or think everything's all right and normal if the orc stays in the "real world". Why does the orc has ordinary human name why does Hans the hero ask for his brother? Dash and Lucius I got those names from a random name generator. I set the story so that anyone can make a chapter if they want to. So fill free to make you one if you feel like it.