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10/30/21, 6:48 AM
Great concept for a story, and the orc transformation was well-described. The rest of the story left me with lots of questions, like: Why does it take until Episode 5 for the orc to come out of the screen and transform them? Why do they go back into the TV program rather than out into the real world to transform others into orcs? Why does the orc have an ordinary human name (Tom), while the ordinary humans have fantasy character names (Dash and Lucius)?

10/30/21, 4:27 PM
@Hypnothrill It's great to hear that you like my story. To answer your question, it does not take five episodes for a person to transform into an orc. It's at random, but the more episodes you watch the more influence it has over you and higher the chances of you transforming into an orc. It at least takes one watched episode for humans to start transform into an orc, after that it can take up to 30 days or less for a person to change. if The person is lucky/Unlucky enough not to transform within 30 days then to have a strange compulsion to watch another episode or go and find a nearby orc. Why did they go back to the TV program when they transform into orcs, is because the Orc wizard wanted them there for the scene, it is also depended on the episode, over if it would be good idea to leave them in the "real world". Orcs will only start staying when a sufficient size of the population are converted. Otherwise people forget those have been transformed into orcs/ or think everything's all right and normal if the orc stays in the "real world". Why does the orc has ordinary human name why does Hans the hero ask for his brother? Dash and Lucius I got those names from a random name generator. I set the story so that anyone can make a chapter if they want to. So fill free to make you one if you feel like it.
Anonymous
10/30/21, 4:24 PM
very seductant story
10/30/21, 4:05 PM
]WOW !!!....WAY TOO SHORT !!!...What a teaser!!!...It was just getting good, but we have no idea what the Pastor is going to get up to..BUMMER !!! & the next family sounds like a hot prospect for Tanner, after all heavy drinking can cause all kinds of interesting situations, [perhaps the son should follow in his dad;s footsteps, becoming a drinker as well],... both letting out all their pent-up sexual inhibitions!!!PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER !!!!!
Oct 27, 2021
10/30/21, 4:03 PM
That was very sweet! A nice, happy ending for someone who needed it.
10/30/21, 3:39 PM
noice
10/30/21, 1:54 AM
Might be fun to hear this from Nathan's point of view

10/30/21, 2:45 PM
Heh, fun fact: I originally planned to write the story fro Nathan's point of view, but because he is a passive character in the story who is only acted upon and he might not know enough about the whole process to provide exposition, I switched to Mike's perspective. The part about the cranio-seminal modification activating was originally only told in an internal monologue by Nathan, but I think it reads better this way, allows both characters to interact, and it makes Mike feel more like someone who cares rather than just attach his crotchheads and be done with it. I agree though, telling these kinds of stories from the transformee's perspective is very fun, but this time I thought it would lead to the better result to have it told from the other's perspective. :)
10/30/21, 2:08 PM
I'm not actually done yet, about halfway through but I had to jump down here to say that this story is *delightful*! It's just lovely, the characters, their sexy innocent personalities, all of it. I can't decide who is hotter, Jeff or Spencer they're both incredible.
Anonymous
10/30/21, 6:25 AM
Why is Langston picking on Chet for bring small when he's an inch shorter than him?

10/30/21, 1:10 PM
@ like most bully types, it's probably an insecurity.
10/30/21, 1:00 PM
Yay! It's back! I've been eagerly waiting for your re-write!
10/30/21, 12:39 PM
a werewolf building a pack composed mostly of people who wanted to ruin the fun, their punishment is to become the wolf's servents, and spred the curse around