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7/11/25, 3:48 AM
The writing here is stellar. I could smell the sea salt and lavender, hear the distant crashing of ocean waves just as loudly as the empty silences in the great halls, and feel the heat coming off the stones of those buildings in the lazy sunny afternoon. Eden is its own character here, and its quiet strength can be overwhelming. Most of all, I could feel David's heartache, regrets, and struggles as he sees first hand and maybe, really, for the first time, just what he could've had. It's all so much shattered glass and that's what I'm here for.
7/9/25, 10:35 PM
This is such a clever spin on the prompt. Also it's really damn funny? The Pride-themed gun being plastered with **‘Hi, gay! Buy product!’** lmao... I love how creative this is (you do a lot of effective and subtle worldbuilding around how the VR works in this world, without it ever feeling clunky!), and I also love how well-characterized both the dudes are. Their banter and dynamic feels very real (and also cracked me up a lot). I know it's just the prologue chapter, but this is really fun to read! (Plus, I can easily predict that what happens to our homophobic dudes in the next chapter is going to get very hot lol)

7/11/25, 2:25 AM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) WOW! This comment is so kind! Yeah, as someone who has spent WAY too much time in Marvel Rivals lobbies, I really enjoyed capturing the hyper-specific vibe of dudes shooting the shit in a game lobby. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Lee
7/11/25, 2:06 AM
Very hot and a newer twist! Really enjoyed this, got me hot!
7/11/25, 1:31 AM
This was such a great chapter! Fantastic writing too!
7/11/25, 12:39 AM
I've just posted a sequence on DeviantArt inspired by this story: [Glitterbombed JPEG](https://www.deviantart.com/criskane/art/1216912092)
7/10/25, 10:19 PM
looking forward to more!
7/10/25, 9:35 PM
The hassle is that both of these men are right. Which makes the line as blurry as it is ambiguous.
7/10/25, 8:32 PM
Can't wait for more
7/10/25, 7:21 PM
Hope you're doing well, SleepyAsh. It's been a while since you last posted an episode of this amazing story. Hope you'll be up for another installment soon.
7/10/25, 5:08 PM
THAT was the chapter i have been waiting for. AHHHHHHH.... so romantic and the dialogue is PERFECTION. THANKYOU. Do you think we can enjoy a scene that is not for profit... some non-camera intimacy?

7/10/25, 5:19 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you! :) Honestly, Brad and Cody are both super obsessive about filming. They just can’t help themselves. The next part does hint at a bit of intimacy without cameras, but at the end of the day, they’re official pornstars now. Anytime they hook up, it almost always turns into a recording session.