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Grieyson
10/27/21, 9:13 PM
Your series is super hot. I'd love for Blake to eventually get corrupted into wanting to get fucked by his Dad.
Anonymous
10/27/21, 8:52 PM
That was Hot!!
10/27/21, 8:29 PM
This is so good. I'm on team Tanner for sure, but i feel like there isn't any "good" side. everyone is on team sexy.
Anonymous
10/27/21, 6:19 PM
Love it. I hope there's more with Bash, I really like the interaction between the two of them.
Simon
10/27/21, 11:24 AM
loved the gradual takedown here! Charlie thinks he is so smart but he is outwitted in the end. So good to give in and submit to the superior mind!

10/27/21, 5:46 PM
Thanks @Simon! I was worried the physical change was too sudden, but I think I balanced that well with the mental struggle. Charlie can try to resist as much as he wants, but you know the truth. Being smart is dumb.
Fort Naks
10/27/21, 1:29 AM
another awesome story DW. I would so love this to be the beginning of the series with a magic ray gun. so psyched for the patreon. ***bows down at DS's feet and worships*** and i love the new personal icon..... very hot!!!

10/27/21, 5:45 PM
Thanks @Fort Naks! I doubt I’ll make a series here, but when I look in my box of transformation tricks, I find the magic ray gun every so often. I’m hoping to get a new story up on Patreon by Friday. It’s called Husband 2.0, and it’s about… well, you’ll see later this week. Then the first chapter of “The Himbo Machine” will be going up there on Halloween. I’m so stoked about it — Himbo Machine is gonna be a wild ride. As for the new icon — I’m working on my drawing. Glad it works ;)
10/27/21, 5:42 PM
Perhaps Matt is ultimately going to be sold off as product once he's been trained.
Test
10/27/21, 5:36 PM
I like the change with Bash. Exactly where i wanted the story to head. Great work!
10/26/21, 11:15 PM
I liked the change up, seeing the Lt be the cop he was before but now as a submissive homosexual. And serendipity strikes again. Before this chapter, I read "Pup Training For Police" and it was similar to this. Both cops break down as deep rooted issues were ignored in their "reprogramming." It puts a good human aspect into the story - not just reprogram to be a slave and that's that. Good job on this chapter. I look forward to the next.

Yourguy92
10/27/21, 5:33 AM
@PupScout thank you for the feedback but I need to point out one more time that this story is not originally written by me 😊

10/27/21, 1:35 PM
Silly me. I keep forgetting. But I can't promise I won't get carried away again in the future in do similar :-) @Yourguy92
10/27/21, 11:28 AM
Very curious as to what will happen next. Great writing!