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10/26/21, 2:11 PM
What happened to the other chapters of this story?

10/26/21, 2:33 PM
@Wolfboy77 the story is going to be published

10/26/21, 2:49 PM
@Wolfboy77. I'm about to publish the story as a full book on Amazon, so the original version came down except for the prologue which was pretty heavily edited in the book version. The rest of the story got some revisions especially the early parts too. I'll be adding a note to the prologue to explain this; there's also a forum post about this.
Anonymous
10/26/21, 2:39 PM
Alton Brown from GA? Good Eats...
nycboot
10/26/21, 2:15 PM
I agree with @Hypnothrill that yes, part of @Swizzington's story was the subject's resistance (a trait I wish I could see more often in GSS stories). But what I like so much about your story @Prepduke is that Matthew is constantly thinking and analyzing things. That's more inline with how I process the world - so it comes across as more natural than being a mindless drone. So even though it's based on the earlier story, I enjoy seeing the personal touches. :)
Anonymous
10/26/21, 1:12 PM
love this so much!!! hope the next chapter isnt too far
10/26/21, 12:30 PM
Oh man, this is so hot!!!!
10/26/21, 12:17 PM
I liked the original series and am really enjoying this story set in the Good Boy universe. I look forward to what happens next. Great work!
11/27/20, 5:59 PM
I remember reading this story years ago on FF.net! Man, one of the first hypnofic I've read, nice to see this is the site mentioned in the author's note from the FF version!

mikegay4u
10/26/21, 7:50 AM
@BobbyBlobfish I remember reading it too back then.
mikegay4u
10/26/21, 7:48 AM
That is such a great story.
9/12/21, 10:13 PM
someone be my Austin and make me your Brian. I need this to happen to me

Ben
10/26/21, 7:25 AM
@BulkBrit wanna be Brian
Ben
10/26/21, 7:25 AM
i want this to happen to me