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10/26/21, 11:37 PM
Really need a part 2.
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10/26/21, 9:52 PM
Loved this - reformation usually doesn't work for me because it seems too 'nice' for a ruthless pred, but this was humiliating and it was made clear he got what he needed and wanted him to know. As for if it could continue - I'd humbly suggest it's a matter of cock stamina. And as John is spent from a meal and jerking off, his manhood might tire sooner, release its grip, and allow him to be taken down. I think a nasty twist would be him being reformed, minus everything he's worked to steal from his prey, and for the higher ranks to warn him this is what happens to guys who try to come for their positions.
10/26/21, 8:28 PM
I still love this story and wish for a sequel...
10/26/21, 7:14 PM
cant wait to see whats next
10/26/21, 5:22 PM
Your stories always go better and better. Very hot!
10/26/21, 5:12 PM
As a former Mormon boy myself this story was hot but the pup play part put me over the edge. It had never turned me on before but now I'm rethinking it 😅🐶
10/26/21, 4:47 PM
this is by far my favorite chapter so hot love the humiliation can't wait for the next chapter
10/26/21, 2:59 PM
Thanks everyone for the positive reactions and constructive feedback! Chapter 2 is under construction...
10/25/21, 1:11 PM
May I have the link to the inspiration source aka "A Touch of Class” by Rik?

10/26/21, 12:19 PM
@Milamber I can email it to you if you DM me.

10/26/21, 2:58 PM
@Milamber you can find it here https://maletfstories.tumblr.com/
10/25/21, 1:15 AM
I believe I must have either read the original story this is based on or one very similar. I'm interested to see what twist you're going to put on the story. One thing I would recommend is to be just *slightly* more vague when describing your characters. The numerical heights, for example, probably make sense in the author's country but "nearly 6 foot" isn't considered tall in the U.S. and all but one of these characters is shorter than the average adult male in the country the story is set in (the United States). If you'd described the first three characters as "average height" and Willie as "tall" it would have gotten the sense of the characters across internationally and sidestepped this problem.

10/26/21, 2:56 PM
@amul Thanks for the feedback! I'll take it with me for the next chapters!