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10/26/21, 5:22 PM
Your stories always go better and better. Very hot!
10/26/21, 5:12 PM
As a former Mormon boy myself this story was hot but the pup play part put me over the edge. It had never turned me on before but now I'm rethinking it 😅🐶
10/26/21, 4:47 PM
this is by far my favorite chapter so hot love the humiliation can't wait for the next chapter
10/26/21, 2:59 PM
Thanks everyone for the positive reactions and constructive feedback! Chapter 2 is under construction...
10/25/21, 1:11 PM
May I have the link to the inspiration source aka "A Touch of Class” by Rik?

10/26/21, 12:19 PM
@Milamber I can email it to you if you DM me.

10/26/21, 2:58 PM
@Milamber you can find it here https://maletfstories.tumblr.com/
10/25/21, 1:15 AM
I believe I must have either read the original story this is based on or one very similar. I'm interested to see what twist you're going to put on the story. One thing I would recommend is to be just *slightly* more vague when describing your characters. The numerical heights, for example, probably make sense in the author's country but "nearly 6 foot" isn't considered tall in the U.S. and all but one of these characters is shorter than the average adult male in the country the story is set in (the United States). If you'd described the first three characters as "average height" and Willie as "tall" it would have gotten the sense of the characters across internationally and sidestepped this problem.

10/26/21, 2:56 PM
@amul Thanks for the feedback! I'll take it with me for the next chapters!
10/26/21, 2:11 PM
What happened to the other chapters of this story?

10/26/21, 2:33 PM
@Wolfboy77 the story is going to be published

10/26/21, 2:49 PM
@Wolfboy77. I'm about to publish the story as a full book on Amazon, so the original version came down except for the prologue which was pretty heavily edited in the book version. The rest of the story got some revisions especially the early parts too. I'll be adding a note to the prologue to explain this; there's also a forum post about this.
Anonymous
10/26/21, 2:39 PM
Alton Brown from GA? Good Eats...
nycboot
10/26/21, 2:15 PM
I agree with @Hypnothrill that yes, part of @Swizzington's story was the subject's resistance (a trait I wish I could see more often in GSS stories). But what I like so much about your story @Prepduke is that Matthew is constantly thinking and analyzing things. That's more inline with how I process the world - so it comes across as more natural than being a mindless drone. So even though it's based on the earlier story, I enjoy seeing the personal touches. :)
Anonymous
10/26/21, 1:12 PM
love this so much!!! hope the next chapter isnt too far