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Anonymous
10/26/21, 4:14 AM
I hate to be a kill joy, but it's so predictable. I hope there are some twists to keep readers interested.
10/26/21, 12:17 AM
A very hot start! I like that it goes right to the transformation of one of them. It can go slow as the other changes. I hope he becomes a bull as well but huge pecs are uber sexy. I'm happy with both!
10/25/21, 11:19 PM
a big fan of the originals series. cant wait to see what you do with it!
10/25/21, 10:50 PM
Cant wait to read more of this. its been great so far!
Anonymous
10/25/21, 9:17 PM
Could you write a second chapter? This is such a great story. i love Jafar.
10/25/21, 8:43 PM
Wow, this is great! Keep going!
10/25/21, 7:59 PM
interesting. can't wait for more.
bucke
10/25/21, 7:42 PM
Loving this so far. There are some military-ish undertones which I find kind of interesting. Is the plan to pursue that at all or is that just a side effect of the preppy obedience? Either way, great job, can't wait for the next parts.
10/25/21, 7:31 PM
very interesting plot, can't wait for the continuation, dare me more, dare me more :-) I really love the story.
10/25/21, 5:52 PM
Thanks, all. BTW, I just published a revision to this chapter, as I realized to my embarrassment that halfway through, I'd wandered out of 1st person perspective into 3rd person. :)