Recent Comments

10/24/21, 11:46 AM
Thanks for the feedback both of you! I know pacing keeps being one of my struggling points. I'm curious to see what you'll think of the next chapters! :)
Daniel
10/24/21, 11:09 AM
once again I agree with Hypnothrill. taking more time to transist, struggling before conversion would be hot dude. nice beginning though. I.J.S.
10/24/21, 10:08 AM
That was hot! I would love to see this become a series how Chuck becomes Rob's boyfriend and how they manage with him being an xcon trying to live a normal life. I can see a complication with his son and the uncomfortable situation of your best friend and your dad being lovers. The story has potential to be interesting, sexy, romantic and heartwarming.
The_Supernatural_D
10/24/21, 9:51 AM
Always love a good corruption story. This one feels like it'll have a slow-burn going, which is a nice bonus.
abc123
10/24/21, 8:17 AM
Robin, Please come back ;-;

10/24/21, 8:41 AM
@abc123 I'm not gone, just been having some health problems lately that've really interfered with my desire to write. There's a new chapter of Web of Trust with the proofreaders now, and I'm hoping to have a couple more things up in the near future, but we'll have to see if my body cooperates.
10/24/21, 7:59 AM
Great story so far, and I think that the transformations are really hot! The pace is maybe a little too fast for my taste; for me, Scott's transformation would be even hotter if it were more gradual.
Anonymous
10/24/21, 6:51 AM
hot. I like how this one wasn't about cyber roleplay. it's hard finding a good story with a hot stud who gets taken down by a younger/smaller guy. really hope there's another part where he gets slowly turned into a bitch in heat who needs dick. would be hot for the whole bar to 'Master Mark' in his new role as a slutty pussy sub. have him totally humiliated but also completely turned on by the change in his role.
10/10/20, 9:36 AM
I have not started chapter 3 yet might finish it over the weekend. been very busy nursing. I think after chapter 3 ill explore other scenarios for a couple stories then come back to this series. also who would you like to see hypnotized next? collins boyfriend or Darren or the group of new guys ?

10/24/21, 3:59 AM
@Anyonka would you be okay with someone else working on your story or course with your permission?
Anonymous
10/24/21, 3:10 AM
I'm still hard!!!
Daniel
10/24/21, 3:03 AM
solid sexy stuff. a bit more struggle before total corruption would add spice dude. I.J.S.