Recent Comments

3/2/25, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this man. Musky and earthy smells, hot jock who seems oblivious to the effect he's having and Jacob's enjoyment of discovery. Looking forward to the next part
3/2/25, 4:52 AM
I look forward to more.
3/2/25, 4:29 AM
wow, keeps getting better and better!
3/2/25, 2:28 AM
The new sub/intern rules at Goldman Price was definitely unexpected, and the meeting with Mr. Goldman, Mark, and Steve with all the others in the room was extremely awkward, especially given Steve's dislike for humiliation and objectification. i am looking forward to seeing how they all work it out.
2/26/25, 7:46 PM
Once again another excellent story Pcm, it has me checking back every few hours for the next chapter with the anticipation the cliffhanger has left me haha. I find the characters and their corruption very hot, and particularly like how in this case the transformation is extended and happens in stages, with the first stage retaining their human forms while still being capable of infecting others. If I could make a request for the next chapter, it would be for a flashback of what happened with Felix, or at least an explanation from him of how he ended up corupted, I think it would add a lot more depth to the story.

Pcm
2/27/25, 5:38 AM
@[cmclfw](/user/show/10025446) Thank you, it males me very happy to see your comments! Yes, I do have a brief session planned for Felix, but Dmitri will get the most attention still as rhe main 'victim' of the story... In tbis series, I borrowed some of the Lovecraftian insanity trope where the humans characters clearly went insane first, but the transformation is gradual. It gave me a chance to do mindfucked human sex between handsome stud characters, and the transformation can come later

2/27/25, 5:41 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Glad to hear about Felix, and definitely agree Dmitri is the main focus of the story, I eagerly await the next chapter and finding out what happens to him. I noticed that lovecraft has inspired a lot in this universe, especially in the cosmic horror aspects, but fish monsters from the sea just scream lovecraft to me lol, and I also appreciate the opportunities a more gradual transformation has given you :wink: edit: Also, I keep coming back to this story to check for the next chapter even though I know it'll not have updated in the last hour lol

Pcm
3/2/25, 2:20 AM
@[cmclfw](/user/show/10025446) Well, I hope to have the next part uploaded within next week
Muscle-Flex
3/2/25, 1:35 AM
The carefully paced build-up with Brian and the description of his experience on the site and then with Trevor was really well done! I felt like I was right there. Team Together, Jock Forever!
athleticleanmuscle
2/27/25, 3:02 AM
_> There’s no way he picked up on the fact that I’m gay because I hide that way too well; no one would ever be able to figure that out, thanks to my superb acting skills. Heck, even my girlfriend Kate back home can’t tell that I’ve just been faking the raw romantic connection throughout our relationship. Don’t get me wrong; I love her as a person deeply, but I have zero romantic interest in her._ Oooh, I hope you will explore this more! I really like how he's still mostly himself but now sees everything from a closeted perspective and genuinely believes he has a gay little secret. I'm not sure how much you've written in future chapters but I would love to see John have some fun with this, asking Zak questions about his relationship with Kate where all of his loving, happy, and sexy moments with her are now re-contextualized from his new perspective, and the fun inconsistencies that could result from it.

3/2/25, 1:35 AM
@[athleticleanmuscle](/user/show/10054725) So glad to hear you like that little twist! Had to find a way to add some spice to the journal entry each day lol.
2/26/25, 6:49 AM
Such a great story! Hoping for another chapter or two before the contest ends 😁

3/2/25, 1:31 AM
@[Redtrojan1987](/user/show/1770116) The goal is to fit in one more chapter before the story ends, then publish more chapters after the contest is over. Currently working on the third chapter.
3/1/25, 12:47 AM
This story is my vote for winner of this challenge...it's so good and imaginative!!

3/1/25, 1:36 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) When I read the first chapter, I thought it was a story you wrote😆

3/1/25, 1:51 AM
@[Hybraly](/user/show/10043434) I take that as a huge compliment because this is SUPERB 🥰

3/2/25, 1:29 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I'm honored! It's great to hear praise from the GOAT himself haha.
1/23/25, 5:08 AM
Your story idea is great, and got me very turned on even before Steve entered the sub training program; it seemed—seems?—a very well thought out training program and I wish such programs really existed. I very much enjoyed the sub training chapters but toward the end there was a falling off of sexual excitement and my interest. Not that the bones of the story don’t remain interesting; they do. But the last few chapters merely became a dry summary of events, a lot of telling, not showing, when I kept hoping for exciting actions and interactions. I hope things will change, and your response to Luke J makes me think they will, but I do want that to start happening soon. As for the supporting characters, the only one I cared about, and was turned on by, was Kev, and I certainly do hope he’ll make a reappearance, perhaps a little less straight than he started out. As for Mark, he’s never struck me as a particularly interesting character, just a successful young gay businessman, nothing to get excited about there. I’m happy to assume from your answer to Luke J, that Mark’s going to become more of a dom, and kinky; I certainly hope so, because Mark and Steve’s straight gay life together is pretty boring.

3/2/25, 12:53 AM
@[Enc8sed](/user/show/10058818) San Diego has a very active leather community. I haven't lived there for over 15 years now, but I recall they used to have a D/s class which met once a week for a number of weeks. Each week everyone participated in a different training session. Each participant was required to go through each scene once as the Dom and once as the sub so that everyone got a good sense of both roles. Because it was spread out over a number of weeks and seemed very popular, it didn't seem practical if you didn't live in San Diego.