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Daniel
10/24/21, 3:03 AM
solid sexy stuff. a bit more struggle before total corruption would add spice dude. I.J.S.
10/23/21, 7:53 AM
Wow!!! Amazing story, well-written! I would love to see more chapters of this :)

10/23/21, 2:53 PM
@italianstalian1987 I'm actually thinking of making it a community series! I used up all the characters I introduced in the first chapter so I have to think about who else Adam had in the seminar that he'd want to corrupt.

10/24/21, 2:29 AM
@Dace that would be amazing! I love how the stamp/tattoos can overwrite a person's identity, and it would be interesting to see more types of transformations (both mental and physical) explored :) also loved Dixon and Adam's conversation before the tattoo process...you definitely have a way with words!
10/24/21, 1:44 AM
Another great chapter. I almost cried for Skippy. Number 7 of nine, all boys, I got my share of tickling and ignoring. I think I need to join Titan's pack for true healing :-) Please continue this story. This ranks up there with the best of series stories. Very unique and well thought out.
10/23/21, 6:11 PM
This reminds me of a different take on your "Second Chance Hotel" story, though much smoother. Good job.

10/23/21, 10:49 PM
Oh, interesting parallel @BlindSeer0! I've thought about doing a rewrite of Second Chance – it's one of my favourite concepts, but you're right, the execution could be better.

10/23/21, 11:15 PM
@Derek Williams A rewrite of Second Chance?! :O Count me in!
Willie Cici
10/23/21, 3:47 PM
I've always enjoyed your stories, and I enjoyed this one. The back and forth between the two characters and the end result was hot!!!

10/23/21, 10:48 PM
Thanks @Willie Cici! I always love a good battle of wills, and this one reflects an argument I've had with myself many times. Though I'll be honest – my favourite part is when Charlie starts realizing he's wrong and discarding his own arguments before he even says them out loud.
10/23/21, 2:27 PM
Very clever take on the topic :D Good to see you have a Patreon as well now! More Derek Williams stories is more better <3

10/23/21, 10:47 PM
Thanks @Transformheaven - I'm always happy when a new angle works. As for the Patreon, it's an idea I've been playing with for a long time. I wanted to do it in a way that lets me clear some time in my life so I can write more. I'll admit, the idea of somehow getting enough subscribers on there to let me write full time is the fantasy, but let's see where it goes.
Anonymous
10/23/21, 3:03 AM
excellent work thanks

10/23/21, 10:43 PM
Thank ye' sir!
10/23/21, 1:46 AM
Normally not a huge fan of dumbing down stories (and why do they always end up as strippers?) but the way this guy talked himself into not wanting to be a nerd was clever, different, and very well done.

10/23/21, 10:43 PM
Hey @amul - glad you enjoyed this one. Charlie's not a stripper - he's a gogo boy, but I get your point. For me, it's because I like to take a guy from reasonably intelligent to being dumb, slutty, and musclebound. With qualities like that, it's usually a good fit to give them a job like dancer or stripper or escort.
Evan
10/22/21, 9:52 PM
I loved this. Great piece. Perfect pacing and nice take on a dumb down scenario. Very creative! Thanks for writing.

10/23/21, 10:39 PM
Thanks @Evan. I love dumbing down, but I also love keeping it fresh!
10/22/21, 9:37 PM
Great fun! I enjoyed that the physical transformation happened completely before he was confronted with the mental, although I wish he'd been a little more distracted by his awesome new body. Well done.

10/23/21, 10:33 PM
Thanks @absman420! I'm a little frustrated with how much setup I've been doing in my stories, so I decided to jump right into the action on this one. I was sort of thinking that Charles would be so mentally focussed he'd barely let the body distract him, but yeah... Charlie is definitely the kind of guy who would be distracted by his own thick pecs...