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Anonymous
10/24/21, 6:51 AM
hot. I like how this one wasn't about cyber roleplay. it's hard finding a good story with a hot stud who gets taken down by a younger/smaller guy. really hope there's another part where he gets slowly turned into a bitch in heat who needs dick. would be hot for the whole bar to 'Master Mark' in his new role as a slutty pussy sub. have him totally humiliated but also completely turned on by the change in his role.
10/10/20, 9:36 AM
I have not started chapter 3 yet might finish it over the weekend. been very busy nursing. I think after chapter 3 ill explore other scenarios for a couple stories then come back to this series. also who would you like to see hypnotized next? collins boyfriend or Darren or the group of new guys ?

10/24/21, 3:59 AM
@Anyonka would you be okay with someone else working on your story or course with your permission?
Anonymous
10/24/21, 3:10 AM
I'm still hard!!!
Daniel
10/24/21, 3:03 AM
solid sexy stuff. a bit more struggle before total corruption would add spice dude. I.J.S.
10/23/21, 7:53 AM
Wow!!! Amazing story, well-written! I would love to see more chapters of this :)

10/23/21, 2:53 PM
@italianstalian1987 I'm actually thinking of making it a community series! I used up all the characters I introduced in the first chapter so I have to think about who else Adam had in the seminar that he'd want to corrupt.

10/24/21, 2:29 AM
@Dace that would be amazing! I love how the stamp/tattoos can overwrite a person's identity, and it would be interesting to see more types of transformations (both mental and physical) explored :) also loved Dixon and Adam's conversation before the tattoo process...you definitely have a way with words!
10/24/21, 1:44 AM
Another great chapter. I almost cried for Skippy. Number 7 of nine, all boys, I got my share of tickling and ignoring. I think I need to join Titan's pack for true healing :-) Please continue this story. This ranks up there with the best of series stories. Very unique and well thought out.
10/23/21, 6:11 PM
This reminds me of a different take on your "Second Chance Hotel" story, though much smoother. Good job.

10/23/21, 10:49 PM
Oh, interesting parallel @BlindSeer0! I've thought about doing a rewrite of Second Chance – it's one of my favourite concepts, but you're right, the execution could be better.

10/23/21, 11:15 PM
@Derek Williams A rewrite of Second Chance?! :O Count me in!
Willie Cici
10/23/21, 3:47 PM
I've always enjoyed your stories, and I enjoyed this one. The back and forth between the two characters and the end result was hot!!!

10/23/21, 10:48 PM
Thanks @Willie Cici! I always love a good battle of wills, and this one reflects an argument I've had with myself many times. Though I'll be honest – my favourite part is when Charlie starts realizing he's wrong and discarding his own arguments before he even says them out loud.
10/23/21, 2:27 PM
Very clever take on the topic :D Good to see you have a Patreon as well now! More Derek Williams stories is more better <3

10/23/21, 10:47 PM
Thanks @Transformheaven - I'm always happy when a new angle works. As for the Patreon, it's an idea I've been playing with for a long time. I wanted to do it in a way that lets me clear some time in my life so I can write more. I'll admit, the idea of somehow getting enough subscribers on there to let me write full time is the fantasy, but let's see where it goes.
Anonymous
10/23/21, 3:03 AM
excellent work thanks

10/23/21, 10:43 PM
Thank ye' sir!