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10/21/21, 9:29 PM
hotttttt

10/23/21, 9:35 AM
@Jonanator thanks man!
10/23/21, 4:29 AM
Oh god, this chapter is just so, so, so good. So many amazing kinks explored -- all of them right up my alley. Fred was *immensely* fun, and I can't wait to see what's in store for Charlie.
10/23/21, 2:33 AM
I never read super hero stories.. I can't get into the theme, but this is HOT!! I dont think I've ever read anything so entertaining and this bloody hot in a long time.

10/23/21, 3:39 AM
@Stroppy Author Thanks man!
10/23/21, 12:11 AM
I second the words above of Plymouth58
Zac
10/22/21, 7:50 PM
It was a great dumbing down scenario, but needs the #nosex tag. Like it better when "yung, dumb" and "full of cum" all go together.

10/22/21, 7:53 PM
Good call @Zac, I've added the tag.
10/22/21, 7:35 PM
Glad to see more from you. This was a nice fun story, and its always nice to get a happy ending.
Slave Abdamelek
10/22/21, 6:53 PM
No. But since the Pharaoh's Army has grown into massive numbers, our collective mind easily permeates all men who are physically close to us. This is why they feel our feelings, and our greatest fear, that of the Enemy, quickly invades them, and intensifies with the thought of abandoning our Pharaoh's protection.
10/22/21, 5:43 PM
I really do hope that this story will have a sequel. Can't wait to read about a possible Harem of hypnotized jocks wrestlers. And who knows, see Jacob been served its own medecine by Fred, who will be able to hypnotise him back with his new learned skills...
Anonymous
10/22/21, 5:37 PM
Love this series, very well done
10/22/21, 3:21 PM
I absolutely love this idea!!! I kinda wish he'd put up more of a fight somehow, but it was still a pretty nice read and a very clever way to showcase it

10/22/21, 3:45 PM
Thanks @Hinner! I was tempted to write some “No dude… I need my smarts…” dialog, but I wanted to make it really clear that once he realized the truth, Charlie *wanted* to be dumb.