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10/21/21, 5:22 AM
so hot!

10/21/21, 5:27 AM
@jakey Thanks man!
10/21/21, 3:31 AM
This was very sweet! It was refreshing to see a caring Dom who values consent and care in this kind of story!
10/21/21, 12:22 AM
I'm loving this process of breaking down and rebuilding the "soon to be pup." And the added emotional baggage regarding his father is perfect. You followed up that tidbit of information in the tender scene with Titan.
10/20/21, 9:33 PM
Pink Kryptonite and Silver Age Superboy? -- I'm ready for this ride.
10/20/21, 6:50 PM
Very hot. looking forward to more about the hunters storyline too!
10/19/21, 7:53 PM
Such a hot story. are there going to be more parts.

10/20/21, 4:16 PM
@Jonanator Thank you. I will probably publish the next part this weekend.

10/20/21, 6:03 PM
@DoIHavePower Can't wait
10/20/21, 5:27 PM
I was looking Forward to this chapter and it did not Disappoint. Please keep writing this story, I love the writing style so much.
10/20/21, 4:45 PM
super sexy, has my favorite kink AND has an adorable romantic ending! yes i love this 10/10 will be cumming again!
10/19/21, 7:49 PM
The idea is solid (i love reprogramming stories), but i'm sorry to say it needs some work. There are a bunch of weird word choices that make me assume the author might not speak English natively. Those could be fixed with an editor or someone else proofreading the story. Personally I would like to see more brainwashing in the story. It happens really fast and could use some elaboration or something. Maybe more about the app or Brandon's struggle or just more of Frank breaking Brandon's mind and then rebuilding it. The last bit of resistance at the end was fun and left room for more induction.

10/20/21, 5:14 AM
@Delianborn I totally agree with your analysis. The story contains some very hot ideas, but it would benefit from being revised.

10/20/21, 4:43 PM
@Delianborn Thank you for your feedback. You're right. I don't have English as a native language. But I will try to be more careful in my choice of words in the next chapters. :)
10/19/21, 10:57 PM
First thing first, its hot. I'm a fan of big sub small top, and if you add that the big one is black? Thats even better <3 That being said, it feels a bit rushed and the conversion could be more low paced to enjoy. I enjoyed it, non the less :3

10/20/21, 4:37 PM
@Udems Thank you. I will try to be more slow paced in the next chapters