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10/19/21, 3:40 AM
This was like a 'main characters missing' episode of Supernatural that was much too hot for television. Really enjoyable, even though it was dark as hell.
10/19/21, 3:28 AM
Whoa, this was creepy (and hot).
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8/25/19, 4:44 PM
Thank you, I'd actually come up with three different endings, that's one reason it took so long to complete... in one Jacob wakes up as Jake whose life has been totally destroyed by the insertion of terrible memories by Jacob's ex father in law, in the second Jacob wakes up as himself, but starts a new life based on the confidence he felt as Jake, the third is the one you read. I felt the first one was to cruel for a man searching for answers, the second not fulfilling at this time (although he might have become happy in this version eventually). The final one is what you read, where Von ends up happy with a perfectly imperfect life... as a reader did i make the right choice?

10/19/21, 1:35 AM
@jeep4191@gmail.com Two years late, but yeah you did. This story was quite touching. We all have regrets, and I guess some people are more able to live with them and carry on.
10/19/21, 12:25 AM
You made Bright lose his temper at exactly the right time. As a reader, I had had just enough of Vanhella's attitude. When Bright put his boot on the pig pup's chest and threatened him with neutering for using the Faggot word again, I almost rose from my chair to clap. Beta Bright is not to be trifled with. Vanhella still has rage and hatred. I look forward to the process of him becoming an obedient, compliant and loyal dog. Woof! This chapter was hot. Thank you.
10/18/21, 10:20 PM
this is so intriguing! can't wait to discover what exactly is the magic doing
10/18/21, 10:07 PM
I keep coming back to this one. Tanner is a really great antagonist. Definitely a wolf in designer clothing. My favorite part of this chapter is him disappearing from all the Argyles while still taking in and influencing the show. I do have to say that I wasn't a fan of Kent. It's totally my own issues rearing their ugly heads, so take my opinion with a pinch of salt. I, personally, would have rather seen him taken down a peg or two for being a less than ideal father. Overall, though, I'm liking how each chapter gets a little bit more intense, as if Tanner's power is growing. Your descriptions of environment and characters are very well done. And I'm definitely intrigued as to what the other force that visited Blake in the other chapter is up to. (Also, I see what you did with Tanner's last name and it makes me chuckle.)
10/18/21, 8:32 PM
Arjan was a far, far worse piece of shit than regular Jake.
10/18/21, 8:22 PM
I really dislike the dom in this story. fucking with someones job crosses a line. And really, he's done much worse than that, but that was the thing that pushed this over for me.
10/18/21, 8:00 PM
I look forward to seeing Vhanella's transformation. His anger and defiance is palpable which leads even more to the desire to watch him submit. Woof!
Apr 13, 2020
10/13/21, 6:20 PM
Hey Kyle I loved this story and would love to see you continue it. I agree with Spiral Fan I would love to offer you some commissions if interested.