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boi98229
10/18/21, 5:19 AM
Amazingly magical!! Thanks so much for this chapter, but it seems like there should be so much more to this story. i certainly hope so!
10/18/21, 3:13 AM
Thanks for writing. Well thought out.
10/18/21, 2:44 AM
I remember you talking about this story on Discord and I got the gist of it but... my God, how on Earth did you manage to make this sweet and funny and existentially terrifying and morally outrageous all at the same time? I don't even know how I feel about this but I'm glad I read it.
10/17/21, 1:26 PM
I'm honestly not sure why this is labeled a horror story. Everything seems to be going quite ideally so far. Maybe there's a surprise twist that ruins things later?

chiboxerboi:
10/18/21, 2:42 AM
@goodbiforever It is meant to be a mind control spoof of the television program "American Horror Story." Sarah Paulson will appear in a later chapter wearing a fat suit, facial hair and fake teeth as the character of Drill Sargeant Adams. I kid. She turned me down.
JMan
10/18/21, 1:57 AM
Great first chapter! I really like the writing and the energy. And very curious about where this is going....
10/18/21, 1:22 AM
WEREWOLF!!!!
10/18/21, 1:05 AM
I remember reading this story before but either I didn't rate it and didn't comment - or I read it on a different site. In any case, I enjoyed this story and thought it was super hot, even the brutal ending which is unusual for me. I normally recoil at some of the more permanent and disabling transformations. I thought it was nicely sinister that we never found out who ordered this to be done to Gus or even who bought him. Gus was ultimately just a product to be moved at the end by his trainers.
Evan
10/18/21, 12:28 AM
Really cool idea and quite a mystery. Great writing, I will be keeping a look out for new chapters.
10/18/21, 12:21 AM
I love that the pack is actually trying to fix Skippy/Christian. What could have been a short kinky homophobe/revenge story became something with a lot more depth and commentary about how society produces our own villains.
10/17/21, 11:40 PM
Big fan! of this story! I always felt like fantasy stories were under represented on this site. lad to see it being explored!