Recent Comments

10/18/21, 12:21 AM
I love that the pack is actually trying to fix Skippy/Christian. What could have been a short kinky homophobe/revenge story became something with a lot more depth and commentary about how society produces our own villains.
10/17/21, 11:40 PM
Big fan! of this story! I always felt like fantasy stories were under represented on this site. lad to see it being explored!
9/20/21, 12:54 AM
One thing I did not feel was communicated effectively by the story is why people would undergo this voluntary transformation.

10/17/21, 10:46 PM
@amul Haha, I am not sure how to answer this. It's a kink TF story. I think if I were to approach the willingness to undergo TFs realistically, I would severely cut down the number of stories I could tell. The setting operates under the premise that TFs are more popular than they are in the real world.
Anonymous
10/17/21, 1:43 PM
Very interesting. Not very kinky as far as I'm concerned, but it was a fun read. Good job. :)

10/17/21, 1:45 PM
@Thank you, mysterious stranger.

10/17/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Haha, that was me, sorry, I didn't realize I wasn't logged in.
10/17/21, 10:39 PM
Very nice. Thank you.
10/17/21, 7:29 PM
So I started reading this series yesterday, and have been enjoying reading all the comments as I go. Most are about two years old so I'm late to the party but that's fine. Really enjoyed the San Francisco part of the story, not sure I understand why that's considered the weak part of the story. It was fun and sexy and had great character development and mental and physical transformations. I really enjoyed the interplay between Big Budd and Officer Jacobs and the Coach and Little Budd and the bartender. Two very hot gay fantasy archetypes there; cop, coach. The whole gym scene was wild and I loved it. The biggest surprise in the whole thing was Little Bud; having just finished Pholus Reborn it was obvious how much the character Pokey Dakota was informed by Little Bud. Same ADHD energy.

10/17/21, 9:56 PM
@amul You're later to the party than you think! I wrote this story WAY back in the early 2000's! All the commentary from two years ago was when I posted it on the GSS and many of its fans remembered it fondly -- myself included. I think this is one of my best multi-part short stories. I'm not surprised by the Little Budd/ Pokey comparison, although it wasn't on purpose. When constructing a group or team, I always want one of the members to be the Innocent, the Naive One , the "Ingenue" -- a word I think I used to describe Pokey in PHOLUS. For me, that often translates as young, uneducated, and fearless. (You might as well add Rugby Boy from POLLINATION: The Series to this list.) I think if you look closely at this group, the Centaurs in PHOLUS REBORN, and the cows in MILK MAN 2 (not 1), you'll see several familiar archetypes. There's ALWAYS a "Gambit" type, too.

10/17/21, 10:02 PM
@absman420 God, I don't even remember what I was reading back in the early aughts but obviously it wasn't the best stuff available. ;-)
10/17/21, 9:12 PM
Always happy to see a homophobe become a muscle dumb himbo! Great story! I look forward to all of them being changed. Maybe they'll all open a gay resort at the end?
10/17/21, 7:42 PM
Such excellent characterization of Alec and the twins in this chapter. I look forward to find out more about how the signal is spreading now that the link is online. Great work!
10/17/21, 4:48 AM
I love Black Mirror, I recognized the setup immediately, you did good with it. I think a lot of the technology and ideas from Black Mirror could make good stories for this site.

10/17/21, 6:03 PM
@Pawn I knew Black Mirror fans would get it immidiatly haha. And I completely agree about the tech from the show!
Anonymous
10/17/21, 5:07 PM
i love this story so much