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9/20/21, 12:54 AM
One thing I did not feel was communicated effectively by the story is why people would undergo this voluntary transformation.

10/17/21, 10:46 PM
@amul Haha, I am not sure how to answer this. It's a kink TF story. I think if I were to approach the willingness to undergo TFs realistically, I would severely cut down the number of stories I could tell. The setting operates under the premise that TFs are more popular than they are in the real world.
Anonymous
10/17/21, 1:43 PM
Very interesting. Not very kinky as far as I'm concerned, but it was a fun read. Good job. :)

10/17/21, 1:45 PM
@Thank you, mysterious stranger.

10/17/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Haha, that was me, sorry, I didn't realize I wasn't logged in.
10/17/21, 10:39 PM
Very nice. Thank you.
10/17/21, 7:29 PM
So I started reading this series yesterday, and have been enjoying reading all the comments as I go. Most are about two years old so I'm late to the party but that's fine. Really enjoyed the San Francisco part of the story, not sure I understand why that's considered the weak part of the story. It was fun and sexy and had great character development and mental and physical transformations. I really enjoyed the interplay between Big Budd and Officer Jacobs and the Coach and Little Budd and the bartender. Two very hot gay fantasy archetypes there; cop, coach. The whole gym scene was wild and I loved it. The biggest surprise in the whole thing was Little Bud; having just finished Pholus Reborn it was obvious how much the character Pokey Dakota was informed by Little Bud. Same ADHD energy.

10/17/21, 9:56 PM
@amul You're later to the party than you think! I wrote this story WAY back in the early 2000's! All the commentary from two years ago was when I posted it on the GSS and many of its fans remembered it fondly -- myself included. I think this is one of my best multi-part short stories. I'm not surprised by the Little Budd/ Pokey comparison, although it wasn't on purpose. When constructing a group or team, I always want one of the members to be the Innocent, the Naive One , the "Ingenue" -- a word I think I used to describe Pokey in PHOLUS. For me, that often translates as young, uneducated, and fearless. (You might as well add Rugby Boy from POLLINATION: The Series to this list.) I think if you look closely at this group, the Centaurs in PHOLUS REBORN, and the cows in MILK MAN 2 (not 1), you'll see several familiar archetypes. There's ALWAYS a "Gambit" type, too.

10/17/21, 10:02 PM
@absman420 God, I don't even remember what I was reading back in the early aughts but obviously it wasn't the best stuff available. ;-)
10/17/21, 9:12 PM
Always happy to see a homophobe become a muscle dumb himbo! Great story! I look forward to all of them being changed. Maybe they'll all open a gay resort at the end?
10/17/21, 7:42 PM
Such excellent characterization of Alec and the twins in this chapter. I look forward to find out more about how the signal is spreading now that the link is online. Great work!
10/17/21, 4:48 AM
I love Black Mirror, I recognized the setup immediately, you did good with it. I think a lot of the technology and ideas from Black Mirror could make good stories for this site.

10/17/21, 6:03 PM
@Pawn I knew Black Mirror fans would get it immidiatly haha. And I completely agree about the tech from the show!
Anonymous
10/17/21, 5:07 PM
i love this story so much
10/17/21, 11:58 AM
Wow, this is such a change from the original Chapter 3! The characterization of the twins is so different, and the signal is spreading globally much faster. I like it, and I'm eager to see how these changes impact the rest of the story!

10/17/21, 4:29 PM
By the way, I think @chiboxerboi has been too modest to include links to his story blog (where he migrated his stuff after the big Tumblr purge). But if you like this story, he has SO MUCH hot stuff at https://chiboxerboi.home.blog/. My only complaint is that it's been too long since he's posted anything new, but the revisions on this story seem to be getting his creative juices flowing again.
10/17/21, 2:05 PM
This series keeps getting better and better...