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Tranceguy
10/15/21, 10:34 PM
great story man! I really enjoyed those parts with the whistle blow. that was so deviously and hypnotic. please more of that. thanks!

10/16/21, 12:07 AM
@Tranceguy The whistle was a fun trigger! Thanks you glad you enjoyed man!
10/16/21, 12:07 AM
Been eagerly awaiting this. Amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/15/21, 11:59 PM
Well I loved this story, and it certainly was not too long, or not dark enough for my tastes. This was reminiscent of Apollyon and got me off the way that series did but without the gnawing existential dread. And yes, sir, you can sure as hell write a sex scene.
10/15/21, 5:16 PM
Definitely a hot story. I love the rug pull at the end then a final bit of torture. Very well done!

10/15/21, 9:14 PM
@Keinok82561 Thank you so much! Glad you liked the ending twist! I feel meam having even thought of it 😆

10/15/21, 10:25 PM
@TieMeEdgeMe it is definitely on a darker side of things if you ever did a part 2 after so long if the hypno broke it would be hilarious.
10/15/21, 7:39 PM
hot story.

10/15/21, 9:15 PM
@Jonanator Thanks man 🙂

10/15/21, 10:16 PM
@TieMeEdgeMe welcome
10/15/21, 10:02 PM
Awww, this was such a sweet little story. Selfishly, I want to say it was too short. Loved it.
10/15/21, 9:55 PM
Well Dennis turned out to be a total bastard! I simultaneously feel bad for Gary, and jealous of him. Considering the many dark fates that have befallen those who betray mind-controllers in the stories here, being turned into a leather pig isn't bad at all. Hopefully Gary will come to enjoy it more in time.
10/15/21, 5:16 PM
Dark indeed! Not so much because of what is done to Alex but because of the way the justice system encourages normal people to become sadists.

10/15/21, 9:15 PM
@amul Definetly an interesting viewpoint! thank you for reading!
Bb73444
10/15/21, 5:26 PM
Beautifully written story and wonderfully erotic. Can't wait to read more!
10/15/21, 2:05 PM
A good start and I hope you continue. For that matter, I hope you come back to Goblin Says at some point, as it's one of my favorite stories on the site. cheers.