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10/15/21, 5:16 PM
Definitely a hot story. I love the rug pull at the end then a final bit of torture. Very well done!

10/15/21, 9:14 PM
@Keinok82561 Thank you so much! Glad you liked the ending twist! I feel meam having even thought of it 😆

10/15/21, 10:25 PM
@TieMeEdgeMe it is definitely on a darker side of things if you ever did a part 2 after so long if the hypno broke it would be hilarious.
10/15/21, 7:39 PM
hot story.

10/15/21, 9:15 PM
@Jonanator Thanks man 🙂

10/15/21, 10:16 PM
@TieMeEdgeMe welcome
10/15/21, 10:02 PM
Awww, this was such a sweet little story. Selfishly, I want to say it was too short. Loved it.
10/15/21, 9:55 PM
Well Dennis turned out to be a total bastard! I simultaneously feel bad for Gary, and jealous of him. Considering the many dark fates that have befallen those who betray mind-controllers in the stories here, being turned into a leather pig isn't bad at all. Hopefully Gary will come to enjoy it more in time.
10/15/21, 5:16 PM
Dark indeed! Not so much because of what is done to Alex but because of the way the justice system encourages normal people to become sadists.

10/15/21, 9:15 PM
@amul Definetly an interesting viewpoint! thank you for reading!
Bb73444
10/15/21, 5:26 PM
Beautifully written story and wonderfully erotic. Can't wait to read more!
10/15/21, 2:05 PM
A good start and I hope you continue. For that matter, I hope you come back to Goblin Says at some point, as it's one of my favorite stories on the site. cheers.
10/15/21, 11:02 AM
Very fun and sexy adventure! Feels unresolved, so I hope you decide to continue it.
Anonymous
10/15/21, 9:21 AM
Stunning, read both chapters in a monster jerk-off session, couldn't wait! You have a real gift for writing, I say confidently a star is born! I can't wait to see where your desires lead us to next!
10/15/21, 9:04 AM
That was incredible. I loved it and so well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.