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1/23/25, 5:08 AM
Your story idea is great, and got me very turned on even before Steve entered the sub training program; it seemed—seems?—a very well thought out training program and I wish such programs really existed. I very much enjoyed the sub training chapters but toward the end there was a falling off of sexual excitement and my interest. Not that the bones of the story don’t remain interesting; they do. But the last few chapters merely became a dry summary of events, a lot of telling, not showing, when I kept hoping for exciting actions and interactions. I hope things will change, and your response to Luke J makes me think they will, but I do want that to start happening soon. As for the supporting characters, the only one I cared about, and was turned on by, was Kev, and I certainly do hope he’ll make a reappearance, perhaps a little less straight than he started out. As for Mark, he’s never struck me as a particularly interesting character, just a successful young gay businessman, nothing to get excited about there. I’m happy to assume from your answer to Luke J, that Mark’s going to become more of a dom, and kinky; I certainly hope so, because Mark and Steve’s straight gay life together is pretty boring.

3/2/25, 12:53 AM
@[Enc8sed](/user/show/10058818) San Diego has a very active leather community. I haven't lived there for over 15 years now, but I recall they used to have a D/s class which met once a week for a number of weeks. Each week everyone participated in a different training session. Each participant was required to go through each scene once as the Dom and once as the sub so that everyone got a good sense of both roles. Because it was spread out over a number of weeks and seemed very popular, it didn't seem practical if you didn't live in San Diego.
3/2/25, 12:13 AM
I hope you continue this. It's amazing!
3/1/25, 11:36 PM
I really enjoy the tone of this, the mixture of ridiculous and ominous/mysterious is just right to me. Because everything about this is _off_ but in a pretty silly way, and it's endearing that Trevor recognises that. I don't think I've ever seen the male loneliness epidemic used as a justification in one of this stories before! And I loved the random observations of Trevor's mind, it's oddly relatable that you'll think of just the most random stuff even in the middle of moments of great peril. Can't wait to see where this is going!
Drako
3/1/25, 9:58 PM
Your stories are always so hot. The concept in this one is amazing, but the way you wrote it is even better! Definitely one of my favorites.
3/1/25, 9:23 PM
This has been an incredible read. Once I realized what was going on, I couldn’t wait to see what changes were in store each day. I hope this isn’t the end, but if so — great job! Loved every bit of it.
3/1/25, 9:14 PM
March 1st 2025 is supposedly the 333rd Anniversary of the Salem Witch Trials. Spooky.
3/1/25, 8:05 PM
i am so excited to see how Master Mark and his new sub Steve get along!!
Oct 1, 2023
Anonymous
3/1/25, 8:01 PM
Some news about this story?
3/1/25, 7:48 PM
"Find out here next time!" It may be cheating but i can't wait until "next time" unless next time takes me immediately to the next chapter! This story has been so hot! I originally found it shortly after it was written, lost track of it while i was off reading dozens of other stories waiting for the story's continuation, and now back again not having to wait for the next chapter or the one after that. i realize i am selfishly considering my own reading pleasure rather than timely comments for the writer's benefit. i know i deserve another flogging. Meanwhile though I'm off to read the next chapters. Steve and i are anxious and excited to see how Mark reacts to Steve's new perspective. Thank you Sir for a wonderful story and your tolerance to my insubordination.
3/1/25, 7:40 PM
The series is amazing!