Love this series! I keep checking back since I can't wait for the next part. loving the corruption element and can't wait to see what else is in store!

Saw you were a little down on this story and a lot of people going anti-Tanner here in the comments and thought I'd drop by and offer some encouragement. I've been a reader of this site for a long time (only have one story written, how do you get ANY writing done when you're turned on?! I'm literally a professional writer and my dick just goes "then just write that they have sex and say the end so you can touch yourself dude" basically every time I try to write a fantasy down) and my favorite stories are the ones that serve as metaphors for queerness. I don't know about you, but I thought I was straight until I hit puberty and my own personal Tanner came along and showed me, over and over, how very wrong I was. This is one of, if not the hottest stories on this site for me. If it was real life, or a non-erotic story, I'd be anti-Tanner too, he's a psychopath. But as fantasy? Let me tell you, I was actually a little disappointed to find out in this chapter that there's ANY sort of chance he loses. I love how he seems to derive power from embarrassment and humiliation, and the way he forces his victims' minds to justify everything he puts them through but lets them keep that nagging sense that something's NOT QUITE RIGHT HERE. The scene where he's got all of the boys kissing and play-wrestling like boy band porn twinks then REMINDS them of how much they shouldn't be doing it is one of the sexiest, most honestly RELATABLE mindfucks I've ever read here. I especially loved how Ethan gave in almost right away, all Tanner had to do was poke at his need to be seen as cool. And that little note of hope in Devon's voice as he hesitantly ASKS Tanner if they can keep kissing in secret? Perfection. So yeah, this is buttering you up a bit, but man I love what you've done with this story so far. And if Tanner has to lose (and he probably does, that "dead wife" comment is a real heel turn, even for an already established villain,) I hope it doesn't happen for a long, LONG (hard) time. And if I could possibly offer one teeny suggestion? I think the sacred circle needs to learn the power of sexing themselves up, wearing more revealing clothes. In public. But that's just a suggestion. I LOVE this story.

another great chapter, this makes me so horny. can't wait for more!!!

Enjoying this story, especially the final scene of this second chapter. Love David's fantasies as he's being converted. Very hot!

Hot damn, what a story.

You asked me comments and here they are. Feel free to do what you want and delete them. Or I can do so. I don't know how this works. I like the story and the end is really interesting. A follow up would be nice. **Some picky remarks**: “will be offering their own to him” better refrase, for me it was a stumble block “If he remembered correctly today was Friday” that is not so believable for a schoolkid. As a schoolkid I exactely know what day it is ….. “those awful slippers instead?” two times the word ‘instead’ I am not a native English speaker so I may have missed some things. **In general** I would love it if there is some reference about where his powers come from. What is the source? Now you just say he practiced 7 years. But was it a an inherited power, or a gift or some secret training or did he sell his soul to the devil? Perhaps just one sentence. **Even more in general**. I keep struggling with the unresolved question why something he could have done for many days, just must happen this very day in a bit of a hurry. Can you suggest some reason? Is it his birthday or does he seek revenge or ..... ? Just some reason, because now the whole story floats somewhere in mid-air. Success Leonardo

As someone who reads all your stories, it genuinely felt to me like @Astradei was stalking your comments. It's good to hear that that's not the case. I haven't gotten a chance to read 7 and 8 yet but I'm really looking forward to them and wanted you to know that your stories are appreciated and I'd be sad if you left.

After some deliberation, I've decided I'm glad you gave this a classic comic book ending rather than, you know - the other alternative.

can't even finish reading it in one sitting if you know what I mean ;)

So excited to get that new scene at the end! Very hot stuff!