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10/13/21, 7:43 PM
option 1. I love the cock shrinking/sph elements to the story. i hope Greg ends up with a tiny cock.
10/13/21, 10:34 AM
The ending of this story was so desolate and creepy. Really captured the Twilight Zone vibe. I was reminded of the ending to Terry Pratchet's *Small Gods*, where Death subverts Sartre; "YOU HAVE PERHAPS HEARD THE PHRASE, he said, THAT HELL IS OTHER PEOPLE?" ... "IN TIME YOU WILL LEARN THAT IT IS WRONG."

10/13/21, 7:38 PM
Thanks @amul! I changed the ending so many times, but I’m the end this was the best ironic twist I could find. Thanks for visiting The Rainbow Zone.
10/13/21, 5:24 AM
An interesting plot twist.

10/13/21, 5:29 AM
@Cutlerfan as long as you don't call me M. Night Ramalamadingdong, we're good. 😂

10/13/21, 6:25 PM
@Uncle Arctos No, I like a bit of a twist but nothing as extreme as M. Night's work.
10/13/21, 6:14 PM
I was indulging in a short self-edging session this morning, but this chapter made me cum hard unwillingly. So… Well done, dear writer.
Oct 11, 2021
Martin
10/12/21, 8:13 PM
I like that story! Very hot. I really wonder why nifty wouldn't publish it. Well, their loss!

10/13/21, 3:16 PM
Hey, @Martin! Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Oct 11, 2021
10/11/21, 8:46 PM
I like this story. I am dreaming that I am this boy! Can't wait to read the next chapter on what happens at the boy fair. :)

10/13/21, 3:15 PM
@monkeyhimbo Don't we all wish we were him? Hehehe I don't really plan on writing a sequel, but I have a few other ideas I want to explore! Also, I forgot to add to the header of the story, people are free to adapt and republish it as long as they link to the original source and attribute the original authorship. Maybe you could think of a sequel too :)
11/26/20, 5:06 AM
I guess the first thing I should say is that obviously all the things happening in this story would not be okay in the real world. Both Eric and Ken are clearly guilty of taking advantage of their friends and are deserving of whatever karmic justice might be coming to them. To me a big part of mental regression is the loss of control. The victim loses their autonomy, their ability to make decisions for themselves. They can't decide what to eat, where to live or even what to wear. And that's probably the biggest difference between the status of an adult and of a child. Not only do they lose the control, but because they have the status of a child society accepts and reinforces their loss of control. They can't be trusted to make decisions for themselves. Personally I'm a real control freak, I need to be in control of any given situation, so imagining the forced loss of that, to such a huge degree, to be incredibly exciting. Of course we identify with the victim of the mental regression, and it's natural that many would be afraid of what may happen to them in the end, and uncomfortable with their exploitation. The key thing for me is that they aren't actually toddlers or children. They've been reduced to that social standing and they've lost their mental abilities, but they remain adults with adult sexual needs and desires. I think their sexual needs are the understandable result of having every last shred of inhibitions stripped away. But of course that doesn't excuse Eric and Ken for indulging them, it doesn't make what's happening moral at all. It's dark and twisted and that is the intent. Now I haven't actually settled on the ending yet. But I will warn all readers that I don't do happy endings for everyone. That doesn't mean Benny and Liam are necessarily doomed, but nor are they sure to be safe. Sometimes I like a fully dark ending. Other times I like some karmic justice for the villains, some play with fire and you might get burnt kind of ending. But be sure that at the end, at least one of these characters will not be going back to university. If that's too dark for you, that's perfectly fine, and that's why I offer the warning.

Simon
10/13/21, 2:51 PM
@Mindwiper This story is so compelling and entertaining i am almost wishing i could find a Ken to help me regress. You are an incredibly talented writer. Thank you!
10/13/21, 2:16 PM
well...that escalated quickly.
Simon
10/13/21, 2:14 PM
This story is so hot! I find Liam's situation so compelling. I hope that he continues to be Eric's little boy at least part of the time, so that Eric can take care of him and allow him to stay in his happy place. The idea of being able to regress to an earlier age is deeply seductive
Anonymous
10/13/21, 12:09 PM
Yes, also waiting for Part 2..