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Me
10/13/21, 11:29 AM
I loved this Story and I can see and feel all that Paul is worried about, for he is very much like me.. But I do not think I could really go and see the Hypnotist, in the first place, but love where the story goes. Thanks Great read
Sep 12, 2021
10/13/21, 3:29 AM
Excellent writing! Your words flow and capture the reader's imagination of the action. Big Alpha Muscle Men are sooooo HOT! I got hard on the way Frank took charge of Oliver's ass and broke the fleshlight. Hope there's more storeroom stories in the making...please?

10/13/21, 10:25 AM
@MuscleSon69 Glad you enjoyed it! It's great to hear that the first person narrative/stream of consciousness approach I took with this story landed for so many people. Writing from the perspective of a sweet but horny (and not particularly bright) young man was an absolute blast. As I wrote and edited the story, Oliver's personality informed the story more and more and it felt like he dictated the story as much as I did. I would definitely write a first person narrative style story again because this was a lot of fun.
10/13/21, 3:08 AM
Damn! Your story is soooo HOT! Your descriptive writing has me in the room, watching a naked muscled blond Officer O'Connor restrained and on the verge of greatness! More please and soon! You got this!

10/13/21, 10:17 AM
@MuscleSon69 I'm glad you enjoyed the back half of the story. The second half is well underway, unfortunately I'm a bit slow at writing and have limited writing time but I am chugging away at this. The second half of the story will leave O'Connor and Gutierrez transition to muscle cows resolved but will set this little world I'm building up for possible future episodes. However, after I do finish this story I'm going to spend some time working with other concepts I've been cooking up. I truly appreciate the support and praise.
Anonymous
10/13/21, 10:02 AM
Will there be a new chapter soon?
10/13/21, 1:50 AM
Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

10/13/21, 5:16 AM
@amul Ass to a 500 lb Whit and going to work, well when you're high on that muscle growth you don't think about reality even if you should. Let's just say the medallion is fulfilling their desires and maybe the rush of getting everything you want has them a little addled. How many bad decisions are made when you're high on something because you thought it was a good idea at the time? Fear not gentle readers all will be revealed.

10/13/21, 10:01 AM
@Uncle Arctos Well yeah, I probably would offer my ass to a 500 lbs. Whit. I'm only human, after all. ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Alex Germany 1988
10/12/21, 2:13 PM
I love how much he became of fut Stink loving Slave boy that love feet just as much as cock now he is happy serving and worshiping his smelly daddy! To me this is a happy end

10/13/21, 9:20 AM
@Alex Germany 1988 the second part has an even better ending if you enjoyed this ending :)
Daniel
10/13/21, 6:12 AM
hot ! wanted so much more dude. I.J.S.
10/13/21, 5:58 AM
I really love this story, it's so hot every time I revisit it!
10/13/21, 5:43 AM
Seems to me that the dean needs to be added to the notebook.
blankbot
10/13/21, 2:37 AM
This story is INTENSE and remarkably well written. Thank you.

10/13/21, 5:37 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!