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Oct 11, 2021
10/14/21, 11:18 AM
Hot damn, what a story.
leonardo
10/14/21, 11:06 AM
You asked me comments and here they are. Feel free to do what you want and delete them. Or I can do so. I don't know how this works. I like the story and the end is really interesting. A follow up would be nice. **Some picky remarks**: “will be offering their own to him” better refrase, for me it was a stumble block “If he remembered correctly today was Friday” that is not so believable for a schoolkid. As a schoolkid I exactely know what day it is ….. “those awful slippers instead?” two times the word ‘instead’ I am not a native English speaker so I may have missed some things. **In general** I would love it if there is some reference about where his powers come from. What is the source? Now you just say he practiced 7 years. But was it a an inherited power, or a gift or some secret training or did he sell his soul to the devil? Perhaps just one sentence. **Even more in general**. I keep struggling with the unresolved question why something he could have done for many days, just must happen this very day in a bit of a hurry. Can you suggest some reason? Is it his birthday or does he seek revenge or ..... ? Just some reason, because now the whole story floats somewhere in mid-air. Success Leonardo
10/14/21, 10:59 AM
As someone who reads all your stories, it genuinely felt to me like @Astradei was stalking your comments. It's good to hear that that's not the case. I haven't gotten a chance to read 7 and 8 yet but I'm really looking forward to them and wanted you to know that your stories are appreciated and I'd be sad if you left.
10/11/21, 9:33 PM
After some deliberation, I've decided I'm glad you gave this a classic comic book ending rather than, you know - the other alternative.

10/14/21, 10:34 AM
@amul I wanted to keep it as "true" to a comic book as I could. Glad you liked.
Oct 11, 2021
10/14/21, 10:20 AM
can't even finish reading it in one sitting if you know what I mean ;)
10/14/21, 9:59 AM
So excited to get that new scene at the end! Very hot stuff!
10/14/21, 9:35 AM
hot!! one of my favs that i always come back to!
10/14/21, 9:07 AM
I can’t believe I’ve only just found this series. I love how we get to see Kyle exploring his powers and the way he interacts with different types of people. It’s really hot and I hope there’s more to come!
10/14/21, 6:32 AM
Definitely darker!
Ben
10/14/21, 6:06 AM
I wonder if he'll reverse this or make the dean horny for him too ;)