Recent Comments

10/13/21, 1:50 AM
Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

10/13/21, 5:16 AM
@amul Ass to a 500 lb Whit and going to work, well when you're high on that muscle growth you don't think about reality even if you should. Let's just say the medallion is fulfilling their desires and maybe the rush of getting everything you want has them a little addled. How many bad decisions are made when you're high on something because you thought it was a good idea at the time? Fear not gentle readers all will be revealed.

10/13/21, 10:01 AM
@Uncle Arctos Well yeah, I probably would offer my ass to a 500 lbs. Whit. I'm only human, after all. ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Alex Germany 1988
10/12/21, 2:13 PM
I love how much he became of fut Stink loving Slave boy that love feet just as much as cock now he is happy serving and worshiping his smelly daddy! To me this is a happy end

10/13/21, 9:20 AM
@Alex Germany 1988 the second part has an even better ending if you enjoyed this ending :)
Daniel
10/13/21, 6:12 AM
hot ! wanted so much more dude. I.J.S.
10/13/21, 5:58 AM
I really love this story, it's so hot every time I revisit it!
10/13/21, 5:43 AM
Seems to me that the dean needs to be added to the notebook.
blankbot
10/13/21, 2:37 AM
This story is INTENSE and remarkably well written. Thank you.

10/13/21, 5:37 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/13/21, 5:29 AM
Great backstory!
Ben
10/13/21, 4:52 AM
A great new chapter and it is super hot as usual!!!! Love the way you write! Pushes so many of my buttons! 🔥 🔥 🔥
10/13/21, 4:34 AM
And so the story continues... lol I really love this ending!
Mingez
9/1/21, 7:39 PM
I just finished all the chapters, wow! Great work! I like the interracial component of the nice white guy serving them. As for how the ending should go, I hope that's a ways off and I do feel a little bad for the character, but there are so many nice guy stores that turn out ok in the end, it would be nice to read one where the nice guy ends up totally fucked up. Not sure if I care if it's from drug use, or just further destruction of his mind though the device. Just my two cents. Thanks again and I look forward to the next chapter!

9/3/21, 5:21 AM
Hello, @Mingez. Thank you very much for reading the whole story. I'm glad to know you like it, you have no idea how rewarding it's to read positive comments for a guy who is writing his first story (and whose native language is not English!). Seriously, every comment make my day. Every comment encourages me to keep writing and to think on new stories. I'm glad you like the interracial component, and about the ending, yeah, I am somewhat ambivalent about it too, but I see there's many votes for the bad ending and is exciting to see so much enthusiasm from the readers. Thanks to you for comment, I will rush to finish the next chapter, I just have to reorder my ideas and find some time to finish it!

Mingez
10/12/21, 10:52 PM
Hope you're getting close! @Plymouth58

10/12/21, 11:26 PM
Hi, @Mingez! I've been working hard on the next chapter, but I realized I was making one of the characters too nice, and I was getting into too much detail to tell some parts. To me, it was becoming too slow although in the original plan several things should happen, so I decided to make it shorter and give it a good rewrite to improve it. I hope to have it ready soon. Thanks a lot for stay pending on the update!

Anonymous
10/13/21, 3:47 AM
Rewriting to make a character less nice, HOT! I love it! So looking forward to the further destruction of our hero. @Plymouth58