I like this story. I am dreaming that I am this boy! Can't wait to read the next chapter on what happens at the boy fair. :)

I guess the first thing I should say is that obviously all the things happening in this story would not be okay in the real world. Both Eric and Ken are clearly guilty of taking advantage of their friends and are deserving of whatever karmic justice might be coming to them. To me a big part of mental regression is the loss of control. The victim loses their autonomy, their ability to make decisions for themselves. They can't decide what to eat, where to live or even what to wear. And that's probably the biggest difference between the status of an adult and of a child. Not only do they lose the control, but because they have the status of a child society accepts and reinforces their loss of control. They can't be trusted to make decisions for themselves. Personally I'm a real control freak, I need to be in control of any given situation, so imagining the forced loss of that, to such a huge degree, to be incredibly exciting. Of course we identify with the victim of the mental regression, and it's natural that many would be afraid of what may happen to them in the end, and uncomfortable with their exploitation. The key thing for me is that they aren't actually toddlers or children. They've been reduced to that social standing and they've lost their mental abilities, but they remain adults with adult sexual needs and desires. I think their sexual needs are the understandable result of having every last shred of inhibitions stripped away. But of course that doesn't excuse Eric and Ken for indulging them, it doesn't make what's happening moral at all. It's dark and twisted and that is the intent. Now I haven't actually settled on the ending yet. But I will warn all readers that I don't do happy endings for everyone. That doesn't mean Benny and Liam are necessarily doomed, but nor are they sure to be safe. Sometimes I like a fully dark ending. Other times I like some karmic justice for the villains, some play with fire and you might get burnt kind of ending. But be sure that at the end, at least one of these characters will not be going back to university. If that's too dark for you, that's perfectly fine, and that's why I offer the warning.

well...that escalated quickly.

This story is so hot! I find Liam's situation so compelling. I hope that he continues to be Eric's little boy at least part of the time, so that Eric can take care of him and allow him to stay in his happy place. The idea of being able to regress to an earlier age is deeply seductive

Yes, also waiting for Part 2..

I loved this Story and I can see and feel all that Paul is worried about, for he is very much like me.. But I do not think I could really go and see the Hypnotist, in the first place, but love where the story goes. Thanks Great read

Excellent writing! Your words flow and capture the reader's imagination of the action. Big Alpha Muscle Men are sooooo HOT! I got hard on the way Frank took charge of Oliver's ass and broke the fleshlight. Hope there's more storeroom stories in the making...please?

Damn! Your story is soooo HOT! Your descriptive writing has me in the room, watching a naked muscled blond Officer O'Connor restrained and on the verge of greatness! More please and soon! You got this!

Will there be a new chapter soon?

Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.