Recent Comments

Alex Germany 1988
10/12/21, 2:13 PM
I love how much he became of fut Stink loving Slave boy that love feet just as much as cock now he is happy serving and worshiping his smelly daddy! To me this is a happy end

10/13/21, 9:20 AM
@Alex Germany 1988 the second part has an even better ending if you enjoyed this ending :)
Daniel
10/13/21, 6:12 AM
hot ! wanted so much more dude. I.J.S.
10/13/21, 5:58 AM
I really love this story, it's so hot every time I revisit it!
10/13/21, 5:43 AM
Seems to me that the dean needs to be added to the notebook.
blankbot
10/13/21, 2:37 AM
This story is INTENSE and remarkably well written. Thank you.

10/13/21, 5:37 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/13/21, 5:29 AM
Great backstory!
Ben
10/13/21, 4:52 AM
A great new chapter and it is super hot as usual!!!! Love the way you write! Pushes so many of my buttons! 🔥 🔥 🔥
10/13/21, 4:34 AM
And so the story continues... lol I really love this ending!
Mingez
9/1/21, 7:39 PM
I just finished all the chapters, wow! Great work! I like the interracial component of the nice white guy serving them. As for how the ending should go, I hope that's a ways off and I do feel a little bad for the character, but there are so many nice guy stores that turn out ok in the end, it would be nice to read one where the nice guy ends up totally fucked up. Not sure if I care if it's from drug use, or just further destruction of his mind though the device. Just my two cents. Thanks again and I look forward to the next chapter!

9/3/21, 5:21 AM
Hello, @Mingez. Thank you very much for reading the whole story. I'm glad to know you like it, you have no idea how rewarding it's to read positive comments for a guy who is writing his first story (and whose native language is not English!). Seriously, every comment make my day. Every comment encourages me to keep writing and to think on new stories. I'm glad you like the interracial component, and about the ending, yeah, I am somewhat ambivalent about it too, but I see there's many votes for the bad ending and is exciting to see so much enthusiasm from the readers. Thanks to you for comment, I will rush to finish the next chapter, I just have to reorder my ideas and find some time to finish it!

Mingez
10/12/21, 10:52 PM
Hope you're getting close! @Plymouth58

10/12/21, 11:26 PM
Hi, @Mingez! I've been working hard on the next chapter, but I realized I was making one of the characters too nice, and I was getting into too much detail to tell some parts. To me, it was becoming too slow although in the original plan several things should happen, so I decided to make it shorter and give it a good rewrite to improve it. I hope to have it ready soon. Thanks a lot for stay pending on the update!

Anonymous
10/13/21, 3:47 AM
Rewriting to make a character less nice, HOT! I love it! So looking forward to the further destruction of our hero. @Plymouth58
Dec 29, 2020
10/13/21, 3:18 AM
This was a really good read!!! Well done!