A very hot story. It badly needed some love on the tags so I added a bunch of relevant ones - hopefully more people will find this story now.

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I really enjoyed this. Reality warpers tend to be total sociopaths and I'm not sad to see one get what's coming to him.

Option 2 pleaseeee ;)

Glad to see this one on Top Rated because I somehow hadn't read it! Milking stories are fantastic. Absolutely loved the development and world-building of this one. I also enjoyed the weight gain element and greedily wish we got a glimpse of Captain Courage and Justice Boy after a year or so on the farm ;)

There's a lot of feedback I need to put together but I'll have to edit it in over the day because I've been tired. To start though, it's quite clear he'd fit into a police community so feeling ostracized is unlikely. Police act like him though we know very little of how he treats others socially, his behavior is pretty on par for American police, though the initial confrontation likely would have had a gun aimed at the pups if they weren't putting their paws against the wall to be searched and likely would have had him request back up as well. Since Bright was toxic and Ruby was abusive those two can't be the good cop psychologically, as we determine our impressions of people within about 2 minutes typically. It's difficult to say honestly what Titan would be seen as because the officer consciously knows he's the ring leader of this gang of homosexuals in his mind and they couldn't abuse him or degrade him without permission. So can Titan portray himself not as the stern captor allowing the abuse? Not unless he visibly punishes the others for their abuse. That could lead to a different presentation perhaps. The idea of punishing others to manipulate the officer while only punishing them solely for that purpose is an interesting one. I'm actually a bit disappointed we haven't actually seen much actual pup play going on in the story either. It feels more like a label just meaning dog masks and toys and a hierarchy. There doesn't feel like a real canine roleplay with headspace is going on. Everyone acts human too. As an aside I'll point out you don't actually shame a dog having an accident. If within two minutes some argue 30 seconds you can just take them outside or to a pad to teach them. Shame and pushing them in the spot or degradation actually harms canine development. I'll re read it later to comment on some of the physical such as the purple and black bruising which shows internal damage. Its going a different way than I expected when I started reading from the first chapter. Curious how you'll lead it to its conclusion.

Awesome story,hope there's more.

more more more!!!

Great job, love where this is going!

I like how you're providing a backstory in this second chapter. Great work!