I love listening to old school leathermen talk about their experiences so much. Thank you for sharing this story and these insights with us.

This was excellent! Creative idea and you handled the plot great even though you have a lot of characters. I'm a bit confused about the sex videos scene though. Who was that man and how did he get in? Also (and mostly) I'm surprised that Trevor just let him go without beating his ass or demanding that he will take the videos off the internet. Seemed like the obvious thing to do and Trevor is a clever and kind hearted man (you can tell who's my favorite)

Wow! This chapter was amazing. Really seeing different sides to everyone and it makes me want to see more of these characters and get to know them better.

I really like where this is going. Ruby is going to bring out a whole different side of this cop.

Oh, maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan. You know, it was hot as fuck, deliciously demeaning and incredibly well written. I love it, really, I love it more than what words can say.... but I'm not gonna lie, I'm terribly disappointed that you decided to finish this series so suddenly! It's like, imagine Frodo and Sam are reaching Mount Doom, and you suddenly jump to the end credits! Like, Man, this needed at least two more chapters of explosive action! I was waiting to see Brad going slowly stupid, because you put so much emphasis in that hurted him so much that other people would think he was dumb, so I was hoping you would show his slowly descent to full imbecility and how conflicted he would had been to embrace it...that was soooo insanely promising! Also, the slow demotion of Stu sounded like you were going to add some extra description of his degeneration, especially because you said Brad was imagining bald and fat in his fantasy. Or how they would have reacted to suddenly have Bud and Russ living in their home, or the slowly the slow dispossession of their properties. OK, I don't want to make strong criticism, because I think readers should respect the writer's wishes and concepts, and I believe a reader should be grateful for whatever a writer gives them for free... but I really hope you could go back to this story, to tell us more of what happened between the epilogue and the previous chapter, because it was soooo promising! To be honest, this story was so intriguing and well written, that it made me find the attraction of truckers, and even inspired me to write a chapter focused on a hot trucker (that is something I would like to revisit again soon). Again, sorry if I'm an annoying reader, but, dude, I enjoyed this so, SO, SOOOOOOO much, that it hurts  a lot to see it finishing so suddenly.  I'm a big fan of your work, and I'll be anxiously waiting for your next story. Best regards, and thanks for the orgasms! You have a delicious, succulent writing.

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Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Wonderful, as always!

Obviously the white noise and hypnotic stuff is fantasy added to explain slight changes in future chapters. From what I can tell other than forgetting to remove the jock from his mouth and pain randomly disappearing, there weren't too many problems except when it came to the tail and beating of course, forced in to a virgin behind with only a finger a typical plug tail will either fail to go in (many have to work their way up to it or only get it in after intense anal) or cause a rupture and bleeding, I've encountered that personally. I suspect he'd need a doctor right now. So anything further will cause some serious problems. As for feedback, psychology shows changes rarely cement otherwise this is called a paradigm shift. These are intensely rare. But you'll never get anywhere without the good cop to the bad cop and positive reinforcement statistically works better. All this is to say a better temporary submission would occur from seeing the Alpha play with his pups and just being around and for some individual who has not shown any negativity or could be relatable to the officer to actually engage with him and only show positivity. Ruby should have been that no sexual bondage or toying just kindness, chats (though he isn't allowed to talk now he obviously will still), relatable stories, and then the positive of pup play. Surprised the Alpha didnt reign in his pup for basically internally injuring and failing to cause any connection. Having to have a "doctor friend" unrealistic as that is, come over for the officer could have put some perspective and been a good character development for all the pups. Maybe even punish some of the other pups. I highly suspect the paddle has been used on them among other things given the dialog throughout chapters about punishments. Anyway, that's my feedback for this chapter, curious to see the next.

This was a wonderfully written piece. I am not usually into the effeminate stories, however this was an enchanting tale. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you!!