Recent Comments

3/1/25, 7:48 PM
"Find out here next time!" It may be cheating but i can't wait until "next time" unless next time takes me immediately to the next chapter! This story has been so hot! I originally found it shortly after it was written, lost track of it while i was off reading dozens of other stories waiting for the story's continuation, and now back again not having to wait for the next chapter or the one after that. i realize i am selfishly considering my own reading pleasure rather than timely comments for the writer's benefit. i know i deserve another flogging. Meanwhile though I'm off to read the next chapters. Steve and i are anxious and excited to see how Mark reacts to Steve's new perspective. Thank you Sir for a wonderful story and your tolerance to my insubordination.
3/1/25, 7:40 PM
The series is amazing!
3/1/25, 7:31 PM
This series is absolutely amazing. Can't wait for the next part.
3/1/25, 7:15 PM
Puppy play seemed surprisingly attractive and fun! i love Master Bryce. He knows how to treat his dogs to make them feel loved and devoted to their masters. @Henry Wolf i apologize if my comments lack feedback on your writing style. i am not a writer, but as an avid reader into D/s, M/s, BDSM, and human connection in general i do like to make comments on content and how it makes me feel. i do hope that is helpful.
3/1/25, 5:57 PM
This really captures just how messy life is, how messy people are. Sure they've got their _unique_ circumstances to deal with but they've still got to deal with figuring out who they are, and all the mess that comes with sexuality, relationships... and then sometimes you find cool hobbies! I'm continually impressed at just how much you pack into these chapters.
3/1/25, 1:58 PM
“Subs are property. They are to be used by their owners in any way they see fit". In my mind this is not quite right. This statement negates the concept of consent in consensual enslavement or recognition of agreed upon limits. i understand this is just fiction, but as fiction starts to look more like real slavery, my interest drops. i would prefer to see consensual non-consent and brainwashing brought into the story. Yeah it's still fiction and my preference is a slippery slope. i am thinking i might deserve an additional 20 lashes for my useless comments. If i am to be punished, let's at least make it a fast stinging flogger, not a heavy plodding one. For the purpose of enjoying this story, i will now consent to refrain from making such comments about consensual vs real slavery!! Besides, i am beginning to think i can make it through my training and get my sub certification. :smiley:
Creasant city
3/1/25, 12:41 PM
I LOVE cock vore and am always seeking it out Love that he is not typical vore monster seeming nothing other than killings his encounters with evil entent I would like more description narratives of the actually taking of his encounters and what he is feeling My fantasies i have come up with are more involved in the actually taking process and injesting by myself or being injested. Otherwise a hot story leaving me excited and hard and definitely wanting morr
3/1/25, 5:37 AM
Hoooooboyyyy we have a gifted writer in our smutty little swamp. Beautiful visuals, can't wait to see what you do with it.

3/1/25, 7:31 AM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) there's no gifted writer here, it's tagged "AI Assisted."

Anonymous
3/1/25, 7:46 AM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) No way it's getting good

3/1/25, 11:40 AM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) It is technically AI assisted but I had to do a lot of work because the AI kept going off in weird directions. Having AI assistance is a lot like herding cats.
3/1/25, 8:02 AM
I felt negative enough about the arbitrarily harsh punishment Steve and Kev received early in the chapter that i made the previous comment right after starting the chapter. I'm motivated this time at the end of the story by the up-beat description of Steve learning to fall into subspace. Once again thanks Henry for a very entertaining story. Reading this story is training me to fall into submission, obedience, service, and subspace! It's bliss!
3/1/25, 7:53 AM
So curious how the story will end. I'm guessing bittersweet :smile: