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Oct 8, 2021
easdf
10/12/21, 1:36 PM
I kinda feel bad for Trevor. I mean, he took care of the others and on their first chance they betrayed him (though I didn't understand if all them came back to normal minus one inch or if Trevor is fucked (no pun intended) for life) Anyway, definitely option 2. Seems like the one with the most potential and with the added plus it will show them that they can gain from working with the cards
10/12/21, 1:52 PM
@easdf I agree with you about Trevor, can you throw him a bone
Oct 12, 2021
10/12/21, 11:45 AM
It just occurred to me what a little devil Ruby is. He gave Christian a couple of suppositories and then proceeded to pass him off to Titan without warning him. That should be hilarious when it plays out. I can't wait.
Oct 10, 2021
10/12/21, 11:27 AM
I love listening to old school leathermen talk about their experiences so much. Thank you for sharing this story and these insights with us.
Mar 29, 2021
easdf
10/12/21, 11:22 AM
This was excellent! Creative idea and you handled the plot great even though you have a lot of characters. I'm a bit confused about the sex videos scene though. Who was that man and how did he get in? Also (and mostly) I'm surprised that Trevor just let him go without beating his ass or demanding that he will take the videos off the internet. Seemed like the obvious thing to do and Trevor is a clever and kind hearted man (you can tell who's my favorite)
Oct 12, 2021
10/12/21, 11:15 AM
Wow! This chapter was amazing. Really seeing different sides to everyone and it makes me want to see more of these characters and get to know them better.
Oct 12, 2021
10/12/21, 10:59 AM
I really like where this is going. Ruby is going to bring out a whole different side of this cop.
Oct 12, 2021
10/12/21, 5:41 AM
Oh, maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan. You know, it was hot as fuck, deliciously demeaning and incredibly well written. I love it, really, I love it more than what words can say.... but I'm not gonna lie, I'm terribly disappointed that you decided to finish this series so suddenly! It's like, imagine Frodo and Sam are reaching Mount Doom, and you suddenly jump to the end credits! Like, Man, this needed at least two more chapters of explosive action! I was waiting to see Brad going slowly stupid, because you put so much emphasis in that hurted him so much that other people would think he was dumb, so I was hoping you would show his slowly descent to full imbecility and how conflicted he would had been to embrace it...that was soooo insanely promising! Also, the slow demotion of Stu sounded like you were going to add some extra description of his degeneration, especially because you said Brad was imagining bald and fat in his fantasy. Or how they would have reacted to suddenly have Bud and Russ living in their home, or the slowly the slow dispossession of their properties. OK, I don't want to make strong criticism, because I think readers should respect the writer's wishes and concepts, and I believe a reader should be grateful for whatever a writer gives them for free... but I really hope you could go back to this story, to tell us more of what happened between the epilogue and the previous chapter, because it was soooo promising! To be honest, this story was so intriguing and well written, that it made me find the attraction of truckers, and even inspired me to write a chapter focused on a hot trucker (that is something I would like to revisit again soon). Again, sorry if I'm an annoying reader, but, dude, I enjoyed this so, SO, SOOOOOOO much, that it hurts  a lot to see it finishing so suddenly.  I'm a big fan of your work, and I'll be anxiously waiting for your next story. Best regards, and thanks for the orgasms! You have a delicious, succulent writing.
10/12/21, 8:41 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story! And yeah, I wrapped it up pretty quickly after everything was set up, but that was the plan from the start. For this story, I wasn't really interested in 2+ chapters of "and then they gradually got bigger and had sex some more". I just wanted to set up the way it happened, and jump to the results, kind of a "and thats how we met" situation. I appreciate your feedback, and i think you're right it would've been good to dive deeper into Brad's insecurities and give maybe one more good transformation scene to drive home the physical changes. For now, I'm just happy to be finished with the story I had planned, and ready to move on to the next one, but maybe I'll come back to this in the future to give that glimpse into the nitty-gritty of the changes that happened. Seriously, thank you for reading, for taking the time to comment, and for the compliments and feedback. I really appreciate it. My next story I'll give more time for everything to happen on the page and try to let you enjoy it fully.
10/12/21, 10:40 AM
@Camo Brute Ohhhhh, I see, it was your plan from the beginning! well, thank you so much to you for write it. It's one of my favourites, and if you decide to return to it one day, I only would suggest a sort of sequel and prequel at the same time, like, starting showing how both characters changed further, and then show a flashback with how it happened, so it will be a bit of both ha, ha! (sorry, I'm too greedy, he, he) Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention it, but I especially like the use of words 'misspeled' words to give an accent to the characters, words like "ta", "ya", "whatcha", and so on. That add a lot to the story and it's a great touch!
Oct 8, 2021
Kent
10/12/21, 10:34 AM
2!!!
Oct 12, 2021
10/12/21, 9:36 AM
Great story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Oct 12, 2021
10/12/21, 7:45 AM
Wonderful, as always!