Recent Comments

10/12/21, 12:48 AM
The term "fuckboy" is anachronistic for the period you portrayed here. I know you're playing in a slightly adjacent alternate universe. I just provide this information as an FYI. It's a good idea to nail down little dialogue details like this when you are going to time jump a story. It can really help sell a jump, or possibly confuse it. Almost all of the curse words that we use now existed in the 70s, 80s, and 90s but people used them less. The further back you go the less frequently they were used and the more shocking they were to the ear.
10/12/21, 12:35 AM
The dog arguing through the kids toy was hilarious but from the perspective of the barista it would have been terrifying. Also, intelligent people take it seriously when a dog communicates (through available means) that they do not like you.
10/12/21, 12:15 AM
This is getting good
10/11/21, 11:50 PM
Option 1- werewolves, please
10/11/21, 11:15 PM
What a great pup story. Most, if not all, dog transformation stories are against their will (not complaining). However, you broke that mould by telling a perfect story of transformation and romance, tender but also dark with Charles' past human side. It ended beautifully. 5 Woofs.
10/11/21, 10:51 PM
I vote Option 2
10/11/21, 9:54 PM
Great transformation/ dumbing down story! I really enjoyed it.
Elm
10/11/21, 12:49 PM
What can I say at this point that I haven't said before? This is truly one of the best stories on this site!

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 9:20 PM
@Elm, wow! It's always a pleasure to hear my story is so well loved. Thank you so much!
Anonymous
10/11/21, 9:15 PM
Loved it!!!!!
10/11/21, 8:31 PM
You evil genius... ;)