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10/11/21, 7:23 PM
I didn't see too much of a downgrade in term of quality, but I didn't re-read this story since a while. There was one point where the time-skip was very abrupt, but that's all. Weirdly gave the feeling some parts had been cut. But this is still a must-read on this site. And I'm more interested in the demons. But I think that's the one that would ask you to write the most for....
Anonymous
10/11/21, 7:02 PM
It’s hilarious to me that the elements of mind control, or brainwashing, might need to be detailed in a specific way or classified as “overt enough” to qualify for inclusion in this genre. To me, this only speaks to the limited imagination of the critic, and not in any way to this author, or to the story itself - which is not only well-written, but vividly characterized and creatively flirts with taboo, which is a major turn-on for me!
Anonymous
10/11/21, 8:14 AM

Martin
10/11/21, 11:47 AM
@Plymouth58 I cross posted it to Spiral again. But of course it's always a good idea to check out Collar, because there WILL be exclusive stories on Collar! Any BDSM story without any mind control element will be posted exclusively on Collar.
10/11/21, 6:13 PM
I like the setup and the bedroom scene at the beginning doesn't feel too forced. I'm glossing over the fact that she could grab any nice guy she fancy and make him look however she wants. Though perhaps the change is only temporary or have some other drawbacks. The changes start out excellent, but are then rushed once Mick walks down the stairs. I would have loved to have some slower progression and realization of the impacts of the changes. It also feels like excessive use of force to transform all the other habitants so severely. They were innocent parties in this after all. I would probably have Mick spend a restless night, agonizing over his overwhelming lust to just suck his friends off and desire to have them fuck him senseless, while at the same time rationally knowing it would be wrong and perhaps even suspect the crazy girl from earlier. Then once everyone is awake the changes begins to dawn on all of them, followed by fuckfest. A great setup with several good elements, but a bit rushed towards the end.
Anonymous
10/11/21, 5:53 PM
Really good! Love the nipple rings towards the end
10/11/21, 5:27 PM
Phenomenal story!
10/11/21, 4:12 PM
Huge fan of this start! I'm looking forward to more! This is a very creative idea and you've got a knack for making sure the mind control and the physical sex are intertwined and balanced together to even hotter effect!
10/11/21, 3:29 PM
Trick or Treat
10/11/21, 3:19 PM
waiting anxiously for the next one
10/11/21, 3:19 PM
will we see part 5 soon?