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Fort Naks
9/20/21, 11:48 AM
I LOVE DW. He is a masterful writer. No one does it like him... BUT aren't there at least 3 guys in "paradise" without mirror eyes? anyway, excellent concept and writing. I miss DW's tumblr with text and pics, maybe he could do a wordpress? love you DW

9/20/21, 3:50 PM
Thanks - and good questions. In my head, each of them was sent to their own private “paradise”. Tony is in a wrestling tournament where he wins every match. Sebastian lives in a world where everyone is his fan, no matter what. And Kyle is in a never ending pride parade, where he can be as out and loud about it as he wants. I’ve considered starting up a Patreon or Sponsus to post captions and to serialized my new novel on. I’m just not sure if people would be into it — I’d love to bring in enough that I could justify spending some daylight hours writing, but I also know that a lot of people get upset when creators try to charge for their work.

Fort Naks
10/10/21, 10:47 PM
I totally forgot to respond to this... My advice, do it! Im sure you will find your niche market. and always know what you're worth! love you DW! @Derek Williams
10/10/21, 10:34 PM
Your words are hypnotizing and I find myself falling deeper and deeper into the story. I feel like I'm there as a watcher, but want to take part in every action. My cock and balls leak and my tits hurt, with out me touching them. Thank you for your excellent writing that takes me away to place I'd like to be!
10/10/21, 10:04 PM
Loved it up to this point. Just not into cross-dressing.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 10:11 PM
@amul, i understand. if you would like to read the chapters without any cross dressing skip the next and chapter 14. if not, thank you for reading this far!

10/10/21, 10:18 PM
@Blackjinx123 Great, thanks for letting me know! Glad to hear it's not a major kink in every chapter.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 10:21 PM
@amul, your most welcome! please let me know what you think of the other chapters and i hope you enjoy :D
10/10/21, 10:17 PM
Good chapter, very hot. Looking forward to seeing what Ruby has planned.
10/10/21, 5:50 PM
The only kind of potty training going on in this house is reverse potty training. :D

10/10/21, 10:12 PM
@amul The Potty monster is my favourite part of this whole story. Thanks for the support!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
10/10/21, 4:17 PM
Great turn of events. Nice to see Kiddo has a brother now. The two will play well together. Love to see a Daddy take such control then then take such good care of his little boys.

10/10/21, 10:11 PM
I'm glad you liked it @slavethruhypno@yahoo.com I wasn't sure I could pull off a diaper story.
10/10/21, 5:12 PM
I've loved this story ever since you posted it on your WordPress blog. I just wish you'd added links to the pictures, because those are such an integral part of the story IMO. (The Alexander Popov reference, for instance, seems clever when accompanied by the pictures, but otherwise registers as a WTF moment).

10/10/21, 7:54 PM
@Hypnothrill Some folks seem anti-photo link here. I must admit I have used the photos as a crutch (I feel I am terrible at describing people). This is sort of a challenge to see if I can describe what the photos were showing on the blog. That and I'm trying to figure out in future entries how to spoof season one of AHS (aka Murder House) without it being too murder-y or scary.

Martin
10/10/21, 9:30 PM
@chiboxerboi No, "they" are not anti-photo here. Quite the opposite. I always like it if images are embedded in the story, but links do, too. Some people prefer stories without images, but it should really be up to the author how he wants to present their work!
10/8/21, 9:34 PM
You may want to research spanking because there are parts you can't hit without doing permanent and sometimes internal damage. It also is less believable one person is doing all this even without restraints on the victim. Adding restraints consistently or rope or another pup might be best.

10/8/21, 9:51 PM
@Astradei This story isn't particularly plausible, but I think it's just supposed to be hot, not realistic. I dunno, I do think it's hot anyway. My only quibble is that when the cop is restrained to the table it seemed like he was simultaneously bound stomach down and back down as the action moved between various things. I had difficulty picturing what was happening because the positioning/bondage didn't seem to make sense to me. That being said, I was really hoping the cop wound up in diapers like the omega pup but maybe that's a bridge too far for this hapless victim.

10/9/21, 6:35 AM
I know how spanking works. I try not to say where or what is happening specifically so people can fill it in in their own imagination. And he was restrained for the first set. The second set he was being held down by Titan who is meant to be much larger and strong then him. @Astradei

10/9/21, 6:36 AM
Yea I realize now that I could have been a touch more specific with his position. My apologies. @amul

10/10/21, 9:21 PM
I get that. I just think having another pup help or being handcuffed behind his back the whole time would be better. No matter how strong that's a lot of rapid fire things he does one handed while holding someone down even if it doesn't seem he resists much when he could. You tried using muscle relaxer next chapter but it doesn't work right for the story and he also almost got bitten. Restraints and an Oring or Spider gag under the hood would probably work best. @Alpha Artemis
10/10/21, 8:46 PM
The sex demon option is the most interesting to me
nycboot
10/10/21, 2:58 PM
Fun. From your intro it sounds like you were aiming for a 1950s style story with all the camp [cue mysterious theramin music]. But I wonder if this might work better if you took it seriously like a contemporary story.

10/10/21, 7:50 PM
@nycboot I was really just taking a swipe at "American Horror Story."