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10/10/21, 3:29 PM
Once more my joy is indescribable! so when we went through the introductory reprogramming dialog with Uncle Mac, I (wondered if Vince had used that exact wording with his brothers, went back and read through chapter 7, and) realized that both Eli and Erik totally already have the same failsafe in place. So even if Eli learns Erik's control phrase, it SHOULDN'T work, but it would be a fun conversation when he tries to use it on Erik and it totally fizzles. Darn it, it would have been a fun hijinx. but even so, if Eli tries to use it and Vince catches wind of that, it's going to mean that his middle brother needs some extra special punishment. Now that's just delicious to think about! Not getting to see the active implementation of Mac's new vince-approved persona was a small bummer, but that just means more to look forward to! The groundwork for Mac's new personality is so excellently done. 17's a bit legally squirrelly, but since nothing actually happened both in and out of false memories, yay. I can't wait to see Mac start messaging Vince with sweet/awkward "miss you" emojis and sending picture after picture of dumb sweet stuff like "Would this tie look better around my brother's wrists or my neck, Vince-love? Or this Tie?" "Lets do an at home dinner date! You can make your brothers cook and serve us while my brother stays under the table." Speaking of Emit i LOVE his dynamic with Vince. He is constantly living his life half in lust, half in love with his son and it throws Vince off so nicely! the fact that not even drilling a new depth into his dad didn't cool his lust for his uncle but actual human affection and parental love did the trick WORKS for me and keeps me liking vince. Loving this story, and hope life treats you like a favored crown prince so that you may have ample time and space needed to write more at your leisure.

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 12:07 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, yet another big and beautiful comment. thank you so much! :D when it comes to Eli fucking up and earning extra punishment, i wouldn't worry. i have plenty planned for both brothers in that regard. i confess, I'm so looking forward to writing Mac's new personality! finally getting to write out his indoctrination was a real treat. you can expect some interesting scenarios involving all the Kingston's in the future, thats for sure. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! sorry to leave you off on a cliffhanger, but i have to keep you guys coming back for more somehow ;)
10/10/21, 11:59 PM
I never knew about humming/singing with a cock down your throat. I will try that with a Daddy and see what happens. To drown (almost) on cock and cum wood be a HOT! Thanks to you, I will also work on pumping my nips and junk! Never been fisted so I have a lot to learn. Must read & learn more!
Fort Naks
9/20/21, 11:48 AM
I LOVE DW. He is a masterful writer. No one does it like him... BUT aren't there at least 3 guys in "paradise" without mirror eyes? anyway, excellent concept and writing. I miss DW's tumblr with text and pics, maybe he could do a wordpress? love you DW

9/20/21, 3:50 PM
Thanks - and good questions. In my head, each of them was sent to their own private “paradise”. Tony is in a wrestling tournament where he wins every match. Sebastian lives in a world where everyone is his fan, no matter what. And Kyle is in a never ending pride parade, where he can be as out and loud about it as he wants. I’ve considered starting up a Patreon or Sponsus to post captions and to serialized my new novel on. I’m just not sure if people would be into it — I’d love to bring in enough that I could justify spending some daylight hours writing, but I also know that a lot of people get upset when creators try to charge for their work.

Fort Naks
10/10/21, 10:47 PM
I totally forgot to respond to this... My advice, do it! Im sure you will find your niche market. and always know what you're worth! love you DW! @Derek Williams
10/10/21, 10:34 PM
Your words are hypnotizing and I find myself falling deeper and deeper into the story. I feel like I'm there as a watcher, but want to take part in every action. My cock and balls leak and my tits hurt, with out me touching them. Thank you for your excellent writing that takes me away to place I'd like to be!
10/10/21, 10:04 PM
Loved it up to this point. Just not into cross-dressing.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 10:11 PM
@amul, i understand. if you would like to read the chapters without any cross dressing skip the next and chapter 14. if not, thank you for reading this far!

10/10/21, 10:18 PM
@Blackjinx123 Great, thanks for letting me know! Glad to hear it's not a major kink in every chapter.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 10:21 PM
@amul, your most welcome! please let me know what you think of the other chapters and i hope you enjoy :D
10/10/21, 10:17 PM
Good chapter, very hot. Looking forward to seeing what Ruby has planned.
10/10/21, 5:50 PM
The only kind of potty training going on in this house is reverse potty training. :D

10/10/21, 10:12 PM
@amul The Potty monster is my favourite part of this whole story. Thanks for the support!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
10/10/21, 4:17 PM
Great turn of events. Nice to see Kiddo has a brother now. The two will play well together. Love to see a Daddy take such control then then take such good care of his little boys.

10/10/21, 10:11 PM
I'm glad you liked it @slavethruhypno@yahoo.com I wasn't sure I could pull off a diaper story.
10/10/21, 5:12 PM
I've loved this story ever since you posted it on your WordPress blog. I just wish you'd added links to the pictures, because those are such an integral part of the story IMO. (The Alexander Popov reference, for instance, seems clever when accompanied by the pictures, but otherwise registers as a WTF moment).

10/10/21, 7:54 PM
@Hypnothrill Some folks seem anti-photo link here. I must admit I have used the photos as a crutch (I feel I am terrible at describing people). This is sort of a challenge to see if I can describe what the photos were showing on the blog. That and I'm trying to figure out in future entries how to spoof season one of AHS (aka Murder House) without it being too murder-y or scary.

Martin
10/10/21, 9:30 PM
@chiboxerboi No, "they" are not anti-photo here. Quite the opposite. I always like it if images are embedded in the story, but links do, too. Some people prefer stories without images, but it should really be up to the author how he wants to present their work!
10/8/21, 9:34 PM
You may want to research spanking because there are parts you can't hit without doing permanent and sometimes internal damage. It also is less believable one person is doing all this even without restraints on the victim. Adding restraints consistently or rope or another pup might be best.

10/8/21, 9:51 PM
@Astradei This story isn't particularly plausible, but I think it's just supposed to be hot, not realistic. I dunno, I do think it's hot anyway. My only quibble is that when the cop is restrained to the table it seemed like he was simultaneously bound stomach down and back down as the action moved between various things. I had difficulty picturing what was happening because the positioning/bondage didn't seem to make sense to me. That being said, I was really hoping the cop wound up in diapers like the omega pup but maybe that's a bridge too far for this hapless victim.

10/9/21, 6:35 AM
I know how spanking works. I try not to say where or what is happening specifically so people can fill it in in their own imagination. And he was restrained for the first set. The second set he was being held down by Titan who is meant to be much larger and strong then him. @Astradei

10/9/21, 6:36 AM
Yea I realize now that I could have been a touch more specific with his position. My apologies. @amul

10/10/21, 9:21 PM
I get that. I just think having another pup help or being handcuffed behind his back the whole time would be better. No matter how strong that's a lot of rapid fire things he does one handed while holding someone down even if it doesn't seem he resists much when he could. You tried using muscle relaxer next chapter but it doesn't work right for the story and he also almost got bitten. Restraints and an Oring or Spider gag under the hood would probably work best. @Alpha Artemis