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3/1/25, 7:40 PM
The series is amazing!
3/1/25, 7:31 PM
This series is absolutely amazing. Can't wait for the next part.
3/1/25, 7:15 PM
Puppy play seemed surprisingly attractive and fun! i love Master Bryce. He knows how to treat his dogs to make them feel loved and devoted to their masters. @Henry Wolf i apologize if my comments lack feedback on your writing style. i am not a writer, but as an avid reader into D/s, M/s, BDSM, and human connection in general i do like to make comments on content and how it makes me feel. i do hope that is helpful.
3/1/25, 5:57 PM
This really captures just how messy life is, how messy people are. Sure they've got their _unique_ circumstances to deal with but they've still got to deal with figuring out who they are, and all the mess that comes with sexuality, relationships... and then sometimes you find cool hobbies! I'm continually impressed at just how much you pack into these chapters.
3/1/25, 1:58 PM
“Subs are property. They are to be used by their owners in any way they see fit". In my mind this is not quite right. This statement negates the concept of consent in consensual enslavement or recognition of agreed upon limits. i understand this is just fiction, but as fiction starts to look more like real slavery, my interest drops. i would prefer to see consensual non-consent and brainwashing brought into the story. Yeah it's still fiction and my preference is a slippery slope. i am thinking i might deserve an additional 20 lashes for my useless comments. If i am to be punished, let's at least make it a fast stinging flogger, not a heavy plodding one. For the purpose of enjoying this story, i will now consent to refrain from making such comments about consensual vs real slavery!! Besides, i am beginning to think i can make it through my training and get my sub certification. :smiley:
Creasant city
3/1/25, 12:41 PM
I LOVE cock vore and am always seeking it out Love that he is not typical vore monster seeming nothing other than killings his encounters with evil entent I would like more description narratives of the actually taking of his encounters and what he is feeling My fantasies i have come up with are more involved in the actually taking process and injesting by myself or being injested. Otherwise a hot story leaving me excited and hard and definitely wanting morr
3/1/25, 5:37 AM
Hoooooboyyyy we have a gifted writer in our smutty little swamp. Beautiful visuals, can't wait to see what you do with it.

3/1/25, 7:31 AM
@[Buster Red](/user/show/139530) there's no gifted writer here, it's tagged "AI Assisted."

Anonymous
3/1/25, 7:46 AM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) No way it's getting good

3/1/25, 11:40 AM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) It is technically AI assisted but I had to do a lot of work because the AI kept going off in weird directions. Having AI assistance is a lot like herding cats.
3/1/25, 8:02 AM
I felt negative enough about the arbitrarily harsh punishment Steve and Kev received early in the chapter that i made the previous comment right after starting the chapter. I'm motivated this time at the end of the story by the up-beat description of Steve learning to fall into subspace. Once again thanks Henry for a very entertaining story. Reading this story is training me to fall into submission, obedience, service, and subspace! It's bliss!
3/1/25, 7:53 AM
So curious how the story will end. I'm guessing bittersweet :smile:
3/1/25, 7:18 AM
Here i am again reading this story again 3 years later! Obviously i really like this story, but i do have a complaint about the behavior of the trainers in this chapter. Steve and Kev were being roomed in the same cell. There was no rule specified about either moving the mattresses together or sleeping right next to the other sub in the same cage. i can see myself taking the punishment without complaint as Steve and Kev are doing just to get through the training week, but i can't ever see myself respecting or choosing to serve a Dominant who was sufficiently arbitrary or needlessly harsh that they would punish subs for supporting each other. i actually respect and admire Dominants who encourage submissive brotherhood for its benefits in building trust, teamwork, contentment, and ultimately the productivity, connection, and commitment most Masters want from their submissives -- at least the Masters i would choose to serve. In terms of building the story i understand that the author is likely deliberately making this training harsher than it needs to be, perhaps leading us appropriately into some aspect of the story coming later. @Henry Wolf Wherever that might be, i do thank you, Henry, for a riveting story.