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10/9/21, 8:37 PM
This was a good ending. I was a little thrown by Daddy's change in demeanor when he wasn't just given a house for free. It seemed explosive, where everything he did before then seemed measured and coy. But it had a happy ending, and I'm not too worried about Jack anyway. Maybe he can work for daddy and buy him the house he was promised to make it up to him.

10/10/21, 11:28 AM
@Camo Brute yeah hahaha im not good at writing plot at all so it was kind of just thrown in at the end. I kinda just start writing with some basic idea and just see where it goes, which is why the endings or continuations of my stories probably have some inconsistencies, but im working on it so hopefully it improves!!
10/10/21, 10:55 AM
Option 3
10/10/21, 10:45 AM
o yes like to see him become a police dog devoted to his pack. maybe a bit of hypno will
Reb
10/10/21, 9:00 AM
Great hot story! Loved all of it & would love more of it!
10/10/21, 7:59 AM
Option 2 seems great, would love to see them interact with some gay guys when going house to house
Anonymous
10/10/21, 7:48 AM
I live to serve the virus
10/10/21, 4:46 AM
I'm exhausted. I must have cum 3-4 times while reading your story. Maybe I could be a little moo to Pup Scout & Absman420 and everyone could use me like Greg is being used. I have a lot of milk for everyone! Wanna rest but I'm compelled to read on....

Yourguy92
10/10/21, 7:10 AM
@MuscleSon69 well I think it's great you feel that way. Soon you'll cum 4-5 times and then again more the next time 😈
10/10/21, 2:33 AM
electric shock tools are localized not through the body. and the power to go through your whole body isnt in something that small. Only a taser which uses a continuous surge of electricity accomplishes that by inciting the skin. and the police would check you can't have someone else tell someone that an officer isn't coming in for a few weeks.

Anonymous
10/10/21, 6:38 AM
@Astradei You mean a work of hypnotic fiction isn't based in reality? Say it isn't so. However will I get off if the fiction isn't 100 percent believable? Calm yourself and enjoy the story.

10/10/21, 6:42 AM
This is porn. Calm down. Just enjoy it. I am fully aware of how E Stim works. I know american police are sticklers for protocol. I just do not like to bog down on tiny details. I do appreciate the feedback though. I shall try to be a big more expansive in this story going forward. @Astradei
Anonymous
10/10/21, 3:30 AM

Inu
10/10/21, 6:40 AM
@Plymouth58 Seconded on making him a police dog. Don't write it off just because of "bad
10/10/21, 5:10 AM
Well done, man! Glad to see you returning to this series!! Gor my part I'd love to see either sex demon or werewolf, but I definitely think you should go woth what you think will work best with your writing style - after all, writing a half-dozen demon summonings will be a heavy lift!