Recent Comments

10/9/21, 1:15 AM
You really captured the feelings of an oblivious hypno subject. The sense of surreality and incongruity. Great job, extremely well-written.
10/9/21, 12:30 AM
Option 2. I waited so much for this chapter thanks
10/8/21, 11:50 PM
werewolves, please
10/8/21, 11:48 PM
Sex demons, please!
10/8/21, 11:23 PM
This is a fantastically fun idea that you've really begun to flesh out, and I love the character and world building! I can't wait to see what comes next!
10/8/21, 11:16 PM
Werewolf! I love the idea of them not being able to leave.
10/8/21, 11:08 PM
As you know I respect this story and loved it so far. That said, this chapter of jumping back and forth was confusing. I have a slight clue of what's going on (Charlie the dog is Charles the douchebag?) So many first person narratives. I'm glad other readers understood and enjoyed.
10/8/21, 11:04 PM
👏Bring👏on👏the👏sex👏demons👏
10/8/21, 5:54 PM
I'm against the end because it comes from nowhere. Also have someone who has a good grasp of grammar and spelling read it first before posting from now on.

10/8/21, 7:38 PM
Sorry you did not like the ending. I am having a friend spell check and grammer check me from now on. @Astradei

10/8/21, 10:33 PM
@Alpha Artemis It might be a little bit meta? But for people who know these public artist figures, the ending makes perfect sense. If you have to explain the joke, it ruins it.
leonardoPT
10/8/21, 9:53 PM
That is good to hear, thank you. I look forward to a possible story :)