Recent Comments

10/9/21, 3:50 AM
so glad you continued this story!
TankonpoinT
10/9/21, 3:28 AM
Awesome story! I hope there's another chapter , or two! 🖖
Anonymous
10/9/21, 2:13 AM
option 2
10/9/21, 1:15 AM
You really captured the feelings of an oblivious hypno subject. The sense of surreality and incongruity. Great job, extremely well-written.
10/9/21, 12:30 AM
Option 2. I waited so much for this chapter thanks
10/8/21, 11:50 PM
werewolves, please
10/8/21, 11:48 PM
Sex demons, please!
10/8/21, 11:23 PM
This is a fantastically fun idea that you've really begun to flesh out, and I love the character and world building! I can't wait to see what comes next!
10/8/21, 11:16 PM
Werewolf! I love the idea of them not being able to leave.
10/8/21, 11:08 PM
As you know I respect this story and loved it so far. That said, this chapter of jumping back and forth was confusing. I have a slight clue of what's going on (Charlie the dog is Charles the douchebag?) So many first person narratives. I'm glad other readers understood and enjoyed.