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10/9/21, 2:10 PM
so hot. It went a little faster than i would like to see, but i love a good story about a boy finding his rightful place serving a daddy! Excited to read the next part

10/9/21, 2:27 PM
@Camo Brute Glad to hear :) Next part is a bit longer and kinkier. I love to hear any thoughts/feedback about it!
10/9/21, 2:08 PM
Werewolf, the promise of that special transformation is too curious
10/9/21, 1:36 PM
"This is basically murder." My thoughts exactly.
10/9/21, 12:57 PM
Werewolf please
Loving it
10/9/21, 10:28 AM
most effective use of a bro fist bump I've ever encountered <3 Great job

10/9/21, 11:55 AM
@Loving it ahaha thank you. Just a solid moment of love and gratefulness.
Ben
10/9/21, 8:45 AM
A NEW CHAPTER <33333 Fffffuck this was 🔥!! Hard to type with one hand ;)

10/9/21, 11:54 AM
@Ben lmaoooo so glad you enjoyed <3
10/9/21, 5:06 AM
Wow! I enjoyed this story --- and especially this chapter --- immensely.

10/9/21, 11:54 AM
@Hypnoguy67 thank you!!!
10/8/21, 7:22 PM
This was hot, hands down. Can't wait to see what other stories you come up with.

10/9/21, 11:53 AM
@Jonanator thank you!! I felt pretty good with this one and its the longest story i've written so far. I included a bunch of kinks i dont really think about so i hope i wrote them well ahaha
10/8/21, 10:23 PM
Incredibly hot, great sex/dominance scene. I love Trevor and Cody, and what's most important is that I love your dom character too. I think where a lot of authors go astray is making their hypno dom unlikeable or even unsexy. Kinda kills the mood. If I'm going to read about guys being brainwashed/enslaved/whatever I want the guy doing it to be appealing, hot, sexy. They gotta have something going for them beyond the ability to simply control other men. The way your character uses his power to make his slaves really love and enjoy their situation makes it sexier IMO. They're happy, he's happy - maybe Jack will be happy too!

10/9/21, 11:52 AM
@amul Yeah I completely agree! So happy to hear that the dom character was written well <3
10/9/21, 11:02 AM
that was fun, I know those are from roman mythology, but, can we see Peryton (winged deer) in the island?

10/9/21, 11:15 AM
Huh, never heard of them. I was going with humanoid creatures...but maybe they can be creatures in the Labyrinth just not mate with the men thrown in. And Antionus is Roman, so I'm already kind of melding the mythos 😆. @darkblade2814

10/9/21, 11:17 AM
@ArdanWolfe they can be used as stead for the priests to go around the island, as they are guardians of important places